So close...I wish she would just tell him everything. This was wonderful, you had my bouncing, actually bouncing when I saw that you had updated this morning.
“We ran into a crowd of zombies and had to take an alternate route. There’s a sentence you don’t say every day." This was the best line...
Aw, thank you! I'm glad you loved this chapter. Tess and Chloe are at odds in this story but they will be working together more in an upcoming chapter. Poor Ollie is trying but nothing makes sense to him and yeah...poor Chloe.
Hahaha, thank you. I didn't pay much attention either but I'm glad it worked. Thanks for the comments, C. ♥
I know that you know that I said I won't read this one until you're done but I just wanted to say how happy I am to see another update, because that means I'll be reading this story soon and I feel so excited about it *.*
Seriously, you are adorable. I'm glad you're excited that this is halfway done so you can read it soon. Thanks for that. As always, your comment made me smile. A lot.
So close... but not yet. Great chapter. :D I'm a bit anxious about how Ollie will remember the things. It's getting hard for Chloe to keep things under wrap about them. I start to think that what blocked Ollie's memories it is the time they were apart. When they almost kissed, when he almost kissed her... wow, Ollie really wanted to do this and Chloe also wanted this, it was so close... Loved the moment when she just wanted to crawl into his lap, so good, and I bet Chloe must have done this a lot. lol Great chapter, can't wait for the next. :)
So close is right. Thank you for the comments! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. It really is hard for both of them and now there's tension because of the almost kiss.
Love the update.... Chloe Chloe Chloe......**sign** so torn, so close. Love Tess and AC. And I have high high hopes that the next chapter will go some way to smoothing out some of the tension created by the almost kiss.
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“We ran into a crowd of zombies and had to take an alternate route. There’s a sentence you don’t say every day." This was the best line...
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Haha. Glad you enjoyed that line. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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Aw, thank you! I'm glad you loved this chapter. Tess and Chloe are at odds in this story but they will be working together more in an upcoming chapter. Poor Ollie is trying but nothing makes sense to him and yeah...poor Chloe.
Hahaha, thank you. I didn't pay much attention either but I'm glad it worked. Thanks for the comments, C. ♥
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I know that you know that I said I won't read this one until you're done but I just wanted to say how happy I am to see another update, because that means I'll be reading this story soon and I feel so excited about it *.*
That's it xD
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Great chapter. :D I'm a bit anxious about how Ollie will remember the things. It's getting hard for Chloe to keep things under wrap about them. I start to think that what blocked Ollie's memories it is the time they were apart. When they almost kissed, when he almost kissed her... wow, Ollie really wanted to do this and Chloe also wanted this, it was so close... Loved the moment when she just wanted to crawl into his lap, so good, and I bet Chloe must have done this a lot. lol
Great chapter, can't wait for the next. :)
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