*cries* *cheers* Oh Chlollie! This chapter was great M!d I absolutely LOVE Tess. Chloe really needed that little slap in the face, not physically, but you know what I mean. She needed to see how ridiculous she was being so she could finally be honest with Oliver and they can find out how to fix things!
This Chlollie talk got me all teary eyed, but at the same time I was really glad she finally told him and Oliver's reaction broke my heart! *hugs him* I really love this story and the way you write these two. It's sad hearing about everything Chlollie went through, but at the same time I feel like this weight has lifted off of Chloe and even though Oliver's still hurting they're going to work together and figure things out, like they always do! So it's hopeful as well! :) Love this chapter M ♥
Aw, Cori. ♥ Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed Tess. She was definitely the voice of reason that Chloe needed and she was ready to slap her so it's a good thing Chloe snapped out of it on her own. :)
Poor Ollie. I seriously didn't think this chapter was that sad when I wrote it and then I was editing and my heart was breaking for them. It's definitely good that Chloe got all of that out and Ollie is still going to be processing for awhile.
I looove Tess here and her rational personality. I'm also really glad Chloe finally worked up the courage to tell Ollie. Trust Tess to slap some sense into people. Also? Excited to hear from Z soon! :)
Tess really is the most rational person in this little timeline. Ollie and Chloe are both too emotional. Glad you're excited for Z. She'll be in the next chapter with some much needed explanations. Thanks for reading! :)
I loved the Tess/Chloe talk so much. It was brilliant the way Tess made Chloe see reason. If nothing else Tess' intense stare always makes people stop and listen ha ha.. And she knew that this was something they needed to work out together and therefor left. This really reminded me how glad I was that TPTB choose to "turn" Tess good in canon, 'cause she really has all the makings of a great friend.
The talk between Oliver and Chloe was equaly great and so full of emotions. I loved the way they clinged to each other while talking and that you made both them and me tear up several times during the conversation, because it's just so damn hard sometimes when you love someone that much *applaus*
Okay, I'll stop here 'cause I'm writing from my phone and it's seriously pissing me off with all the weird spelling suggestions. I thought it was suppose to be a smartphone and therefor could tell the different between writing in english and in Danish, but I guess not. Sorry for the small rant here, I just had to get it out LOL
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I'm really glad you enjoyed Tess/Chloe. Tess truly is a BAMF and she was done playing. She just wants to go back to the regular timeline. And she is a good friend - to Chloe and to Ollie. I loved s10 Tess. I loved Tess when she was bad too though. Cassidy is awesome.
Aw. *hugs* It did get emotional but all that stuff needed to come out. I'm glad you liked it and that you're looking forward to the next chapter.
The phone rant? I hear you! My phone does the weirdest things. It refuses to accept "bitch" as a word and for some reason it always turns "the" into "TGW". I do talk about The Good Wife a lot in texts, but not more than I use "the". Random phone is random.
I love how it all came out, and how it hurt but they talked it all out. It's more than we really got on the show.
Also commend Tess for her patience. She's a very all business and rational type person, so to see Chloe fall to pieces over something she know couldn't be further from the truth would have been extremely frustrating for her.
Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed their talk. They still have a few more things to work out but Ollie was pretty overwhelmed at this point. Glad you liked Tess too. She was definitely frustrated. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
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This Chlollie talk got me all teary eyed, but at the same time I was really glad she finally told him and Oliver's reaction broke my heart! *hugs him* I really love this story and the way you write these two. It's sad hearing about everything Chlollie went through, but at the same time I feel like this weight has lifted off of Chloe and even though Oliver's still hurting they're going to work together and figure things out, like they always do! So it's hopeful as well! :) Love this chapter M ♥
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Poor Ollie. I seriously didn't think this chapter was that sad when I wrote it and then I was editing and my heart was breaking for them. It's definitely good that Chloe got all of that out and Ollie is still going to be processing for awhile.
Thanks so much for the comments. *hugs*
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I looove Tess here and her rational personality. I'm also really glad Chloe finally worked up the courage to tell Ollie. Trust Tess to slap some sense into people. Also? Excited to hear from Z soon! :)
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Tess really is the most rational person in this little timeline. Ollie and Chloe are both too emotional. Glad you're excited for Z. She'll be in the next chapter with some much needed explanations. Thanks for reading! :)
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The talk between Oliver and Chloe was equaly great and so full of emotions. I loved the way they clinged to each other while talking and that you made both them and me tear up several times during the conversation, because it's just so damn hard sometimes when you love someone that much *applaus*
Okay, I'll stop here 'cause I'm writing from my phone and it's seriously pissing me off with all the weird spelling suggestions. I thought it was suppose to be a smartphone and therefor could tell the different between writing in english and in Danish, but I guess not. Sorry for the small rant here, I just had to get it out LOL ( ... )
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I'm really glad you enjoyed Tess/Chloe. Tess truly is a BAMF and she was done playing. She just wants to go back to the regular timeline. And she is a good friend - to Chloe and to Ollie. I loved s10 Tess. I loved Tess when she was bad too though. Cassidy is awesome.
Aw. *hugs* It did get emotional but all that stuff needed to come out. I'm glad you liked it and that you're looking forward to the next chapter.
The phone rant? I hear you! My phone does the weirdest things. It refuses to accept "bitch" as a word and for some reason it always turns "the" into "TGW". I do talk about The Good Wife a lot in texts, but not more than I use "the". Random phone is random.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Also commend Tess for her patience. She's a very all business and rational type person, so to see Chloe fall to pieces over something she know couldn't be further from the truth would have been extremely frustrating for her.
Fabulous update.
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