And now all the pieces starts to fall into place. The how, the when and the why.. *\o/*
Oh and Lois and Clark are for all we know non-existing in this reality! Zatanna really do know how to stire up things with her magic. I for one would never in a million years ask for a wish, given the knowledge I have of her doings ha ha...
Another brilliant chapter in this amazing story. It's so angsty and I keep hoping for them to have everything they want and return safely to their own/right time. But I know it don't work that way, and mainly I just want them back to 2010(?) because everything around them has gone terrible wrong (zombies, explosion in the factory and the crime rate in Metr.) and I know that it will end allright, so please give Ollie and Chloe that Info from me LOOL!!
I had a bit of a hard time with this chapter because even though all the explanations were in my head when I started the story, this was sort of pivotal so I wanted to make sure everything came across right. I'm so glad you thought it did.
Hahaha, I agree. I would never go to Zee for help; at least not the Smallville version. I don't read comics so I don't know if her character is this...colorful, shall we say?
Aw, I'll tell them you said it will be all right. ♥
You made what seemed like really complicated circumstances make sense in a very logical way. It's going to weigh on him quickly, the gravity of hanging on to his wish. Things that are unnatural always have a way of unraveling in the end. The Kandorians are still there, as are the Suicide Squad. They'll still be separated but being unable to predict when things might come crashing down on them. Oliver's going to have to let go of the wish... :( We all knew it was to spend more time with Chloe. ;)
Thank you! I'm so glad it made sense. All this time, I've had it in my head so I was a little nervous about this chapter. I knew it made sense to me but I'm really happy it's making sense to other people too. :)
Yeah, he's got to make a choice and there really is only one but it's not easy for either of them.
This chapter was awesome M. I decided to re-read and I forgot to mention the other day how much I liked the Tess and AC scene. IDK why lol I mean obviously I like everything you write, because you capture the characters so well, but there was just something about Tess with her hair in a bun, glasses on, and shoes of that paints this picture of ease between the two. It was a really nice way to start out the chapter.
I also loved how Oliver was trying to make the night nice for Chloe. I like that they had a chance to eat and talk and spend some actual time together. We didn't get to see enough of that in the show and the fact that you capture their voices so well it's like I can actually picture it happening in my head. <3
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Hee! I'm really glad you liked the Tess and AC part. You should remind me to tell you a secret.
Poor Chlollie have suffered so much in this story, especially Chloe so I wanted them to have some fun before I totally tortured them again. We really didn't get enough of that on the show which was a shame because Allison and Justin both do the lighthearted stuff really well.
Thank you! I know I already told you but I'm so glad all of that made sense because I was really nervous about it. I knew it made sense to me, but I'm crazy sometimes so...anyway, poor Chlollie and especially Ollie. They don't want to leave. I'm so happy you enjoyed this.
That story is so amazing. :D It's great. Oliver just wanted more time with Chloe, and I bet Chloe wanted that too. Everything was so sweet and easy with them, a date, a good time together. But the consequences were very big and bad. Great chapter. :)
Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. They both definitely wanted more time together and now they have to find a way to give it up. Thanks for reading!
I love it how he subconsiously wished for Chloe to be with him! <3 But how on earth is he going to break the spell??I don't think he's able to just wish it off. Don't wanna believe Lois & Clark are gone, but they're not her eso th eonly way to make things normal is to break the spell. It's so sad. They will have to be separated again :( But I know you'll give us a happy ending, right? ;) Thanks so much for the chapter, I love it!
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter. It's going to be next to impossible for Oliver to let go of Chloe...but these two know all about self-sacrifice. And chances for a happy ending are very high...
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Oh and Lois and Clark are for all we know non-existing in this reality! Zatanna really do know how to stire up things with her magic. I for one would never in a million years ask for a wish, given the knowledge I have of her doings ha ha...
Another brilliant chapter in this amazing story. It's so angsty and I keep hoping for them to have everything they want and return safely to their own/right time. But I know it don't work that way, and mainly I just want them back to 2010(?) because everything around them has gone terrible wrong (zombies, explosion in the factory and the crime rate in Metr.) and I know that it will end allright, so please give Ollie and Chloe that Info from me LOOL!!
Excellent as always M..;))))))
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I had a bit of a hard time with this chapter because even though all the explanations were in my head when I started the story, this was sort of pivotal so I wanted to make sure everything came across right. I'm so glad you thought it did.
Hahaha, I agree. I would never go to Zee for help; at least not the Smallville version. I don't read comics so I don't know if her character is this...colorful, shall we say?
Aw, I'll tell them you said it will be all right. ♥
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Yeah, he's got to make a choice and there really is only one but it's not easy for either of them.
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This chapter was awesome M. I decided to re-read and I forgot to mention the other day how much I liked the Tess and AC scene. IDK why lol I mean obviously I like everything you write, because you capture the characters so well, but there was just something about Tess with her hair in a bun, glasses on, and shoes of that paints this picture of ease between the two. It was a really nice way to start out the chapter.
I also loved how Oliver was trying to make the night nice for Chloe. I like that they had a chance to eat and talk and spend some actual time together. We didn't get to see enough of that in the show and the fact that you capture their voices so well it's like I can actually picture it happening in my head. <3 ( ... )
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Hee! I'm really glad you liked the Tess and AC part. You should remind me to tell you a secret.
Poor Chlollie have suffered so much in this story, especially Chloe so I wanted them to have some fun before I totally tortured them again. We really didn't get enough of that on the show which was a shame because Allison and Justin both do the lighthearted stuff really well.
Thank you! I know I already told you but I'm so glad all of that made sense because I was really nervous about it. I knew it made sense to me, but I'm crazy sometimes so...anyway, poor Chlollie and especially Ollie. They don't want to leave. I'm so happy you enjoyed this.
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Great chapter. :)
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But how on earth is he going to break the spell??I don't think he's able to just wish it off.
Don't wanna believe Lois & Clark are gone, but they're not her eso th eonly way to make things normal is to break the spell. It's so sad. They will have to be separated again :( But I know you'll give us a happy ending, right? ;)
Thanks so much for the chapter, I love it!
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