No More Wishing 11/12

[ihearttvsnark]

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[sxymami0909]

OMG M...*cries hysterically* Even though I know rationally everything will be okay I'm like crying over here for them. I really liked this chapter (surprise surprise angst whore *points to self*) I enjoyed because it just felt so real. It's like here thery are in this reality with each other because he wished for more time with her and when he went to Zatanna he wasn't thinking about anyone else or the consequences. He was just thinking about the bottom line (and really who could blame him), but in this chapter you can see the struggle inside of him, the guilt he's feeling but also this huge amount of pain at realizing he was going to have to let go of Chloe and I think how you write him here, which by the way is always so in character *Loves your Ollie* lol, shows what kind of man he really is that's he'd sacrifice his happiness for the time being for the well being of everyone else

[ihearttvsnark]

*hugs* Don't cry...I know this chapter was really angsty but it gets better. I'm so happy you enjoyed it and thank you so much for the compliments on Ollie. He felt really bad but at the same time, he didn't want to give up Chloe even if it is only for a little while longer.

Aw, I'm really glad you liked that last part. I just wanted to show that they were accepting it but they still weren't going to go through the pain of saying goodbye.

Yay for LJ working for a change and Juliete did such an amazing job with all these banners. Thanks again. ♥

[greenteam4ever]

The only thing that makes me happy is that they will remember everything. It willbe painful enough to be separated again but at least they'll have their memories and Oliver will be sure she's coming back.
Now I'm dying to see their reunion!
Thanks so much for the chapter, it was perfect! Chloe's not holding back anymore, now they will truly have their happily ever after :)

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you for reading and commenting! This chapter was painful but yes, it is definitely good that they remember everything. I'm really glad you enjoyed this.

[danisige]

Chloe accepted living with Oliver this is great. :D
What Zatanna knows??? Hmmm....
Awww... they slept together and they know that probably they will wake up alone again... awww....
They deserve to be together again, and spend ever waking moment cuddling and kissing a lot. :D

Great chapter.:)

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, thanks for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it. Zatanna might just have something up her sleeve...it is really difficult for Chloe and Ollie to know they have to be apart again but yeah, once they're together for good, I definitely see a lot of kissing and cuddling in their future. :)

[watcharrow]

omg ive read this one straight from the beginning and wow... i felt so many differents emotions all along (hope, anger, joy, heartbroken...) especially in this last chapter... *tears* for this one what they're saying to each other before they'll be separated again... excellent job u've done here... oh please cant wait to read the last one... thanks again for sharing...

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story enough to go through all those emotions. Thanks for reading and commenting. The next chapter is finished and will be posted soon-ish. :)

[watcharrow]

cant wait to read it.. thanks again.. and well done...

[saurina]

You never disappoint, never ever!!

The angst in this chapter was amazing, I felt their heartache through the whole we've-gotta-seperate-for-a-while-but-we-really-don't-wanna and I'm so pleased that they get to keep their memories of the last few days together.

Ohh and I got the impression that Zatanna has a little something extra up her sleeve, I can't wait to find out what, because with her you never know what to expect LOOOL!!

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, thanks! ♥ I'm really glad you think so and I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. It was angsty for sure and you might just be on to something as far as Zee goes. Thanks so much for always commenting. :)