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ihearttvsnark

All the Right Moves 1/10

Dec 23, 2011 08:31

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pairing: chloe and oliver, smallville, title: all the right moves, series: elm universe, fanfiction

Comments 55

sxymami0909 December 23 2011, 15:06:20 UTC

First comment, woot! *dances*

...Anyway lol This is such an awesome start to this story! I love how Oliver is so confused and being a bit of an ass lol. I also love how Lois is freaking out and Chloe's all 'I don't have time to worry about this.' LoL ( ... )

ihearttvsnark December 23 2011, 23:34:37 UTC

Haha, I heart you. Thanks so much for all the comments. I'm really happy you're enjoying this as much as you are. Hahaha, Lois and Clark have some interesting moments coming up in this story. (Princess Bride is awesome).

*sigh* Chlollie. You know how it is. One step forward and then like 800 back. I'm glad you're already emotionally invested in this and that you're not totally mad at Ollie and still want to hug him while you're kicking him and not just because he's hot. ;)

Awwww. Thank you. ♥

soapfan101 December 23 2011, 16:21:08 UTC

loving it already...Why my AUOllie being an ahole...lol...can't wait for more :D

ihearttvsnark December 23 2011, 23:29:42 UTC

Thanks, Stacy! I'm glad you're enjoying this. Aw, AU!Ollie just needs some time. And maybe another swift kick or two from Chloe. ;)

xtremeroswellia December 23 2011, 16:33:45 UTC

First off. *Kicks Oliver in the shin* I hope Chloe nearly runs him down with a truck. Seems like it's going to take that for him to get his crap together.

I'm looking forward to AC, Vic and Bart coming to the realization that Chloe is the one who's been guiding all of them. And I can't remember but--do they all know about one another? Or realize they're working together?

Loving this fic, Mandy!

ihearttvsnark December 23 2011, 23:31:40 UTC

Haha, poor Ollie. He might surprise you. ;)

AC, Vic and Bart do not know about each other aside from having seen each other around QI at this point. But one of them *coughsVictorcoughs* knows something.

Thanks so much, Angie! I'm glad you're enjoying this.

greenteam4ever December 23 2011, 16:39:23 UTC

I'n SOOO excited! So glad yoy've posted it! <3
Everything is really complicated. And it's the way it should be. It wouldn't be believable if Oliver just suddenly decided to be the person he wanted to be. He really gave Chloe (and me) a hope when he told he wanted to matter. But then..Then he turned out to be weak, to give up without a fight.
I hope that the prospect of losing Chloe as a friend will sober him up. She did everything in her powers to help him but he did nothing but dissapoint her.
The chapter is AWESOME! Thank you a million times! Looking forward to the next one!!
P.S. Ooooh, the banners! I'm in love with them! *__*

ihearttvsnark December 23 2011, 23:37:57 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you're excited. Thanks for the comments! *nods* Exactly. No one can change their behavior that drastically overnight. Oliver has a long way to go and he really does want to change, but Chloe's right. He's afraid to fail so he's just not bothering to try. But Chloe walking out on him definitely opened his eyes. Thanks again.

Glad you like the banners! I can't stress enough how fabulous Juliete is.

tadashee December 23 2011, 17:03:02 UTC

LOVE this! It was even better than I expected! I am glad Chloe set oliver straight but at the same time didnt give him the excuse that she left him. So looking forward to how oliver redeems himself

ihearttvsnark December 23 2011, 23:39:19 UTC

Awww! Thank you! I really appreciate you saying that. Chloe's words/actions definitely got through to Oliver which you will see in the next chapter. :)