All the Right Moves 2/10

[ihearttvsnark]

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[sxymami0909]

Oh Chlollie *happy sigh* The massive love I have for these two should seriously be like illegal or something LOL.

Mandy this was so beyond perfect! The roof is like their special place. *hugs them* I absolutely love the way you played this scene with them. It was so honest and raw and I could feel the emotion and hovering tension between them. I can really feel Oliver's need and want to change here and the connection between them is so clear even if they choose not to acknowledge it yet.

God I love Chlollie to death. You wrote this so amazing this was an awesome chapter M! ♥

PS: First comment! WOOT! *dances*

[ihearttvsnark]

You know technically, you'd have the first comment no matter what since you read this a week ago, right? ♥

Seriously, thank you. I'm so happy you're enjoying this story as much as you are. And yeah, I hear you on the massive love thing. I'd say we need mental help, but I don't think it's a problem. Fangirls for life, bitches.

Oops, off-topic. Anyway, thank you! The roof is totally their place and that tension isn't going to go away anytime soon. It might actually get more awkward. Hee. Exactly. They're not choosing to acknowledge the connection between them just yet but it's definitely there and one of them *coughs*Ollie*coughs* knows his feelings aren't completely platonic.

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks for the comments! I'm glad you're enjoying this. Oliver actually already knows about her Watchtower status; she told him about it on the plane ride back and he's seen her interacting with all of the guys since they all work together at QI so he has no reason to be jealous.

[luckylily381]

:) It's great to see the pair of them reconnecting and getting an insight into Ollie's head, this chapter goes to show just how much he relies on Chloe and values her even if he doesn't express it in a particularly healthy way!

It's good to see that Tess is out of the picture as well, but I can't help wondering if she'll be back causing trouble for the both of them soon!!

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks! Ollie really does rely on Chloe a lot and her telling him that she was done with him in the last chapter freaked him out. It is important to him that he does this on his own though even if he does ask for help from time to time.

Tess is gone for good.

[xtremeroswellia]

:O Wow. I didn't expect Ollie to pull his head out of his ass that fast and seek out Clark. His description of Clark made me laugh. I can't blame Chloe for being doubtful about him and his intentions, but I hope he doesn't screw up again. Can't wait for more, Mandy! :)

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks, Angie. Hahaha, yeah...he's ready to change. Glad you enjoyed that description of Clark. Chloe is definitely going to be cautious for awhile. I'm really happy you're enjoying this. Thanks for reading! :)

[starry_laa]

I just caught up on this series and I love it. It's such a wonderful and original idea and I ove the concept of an AU world with Ollie and Chloe at odds with each other but being destined for one another. I'm glad Ollie is on the path to redemption and I look forward to where you go with this!

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, thank you so much! I'm really happy you're enjoying it. This series started out as a oneshot and just spiraled in my mind so I love that people seem to like it so much. Ollie is definitely on the path to redemption, but it's a bumpy one.