All the Right Moves 3/10

[ihearttvsnark]

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[luckylily381]

Oh Clark - I just love the fact that he puts his foot in!

Oliver's 'subtle' way of trying to find out if Chloe is seeing anyone was adorable and that line right at the end about Chloe being the only person he can count on? Perfect!!!! It's great to see that he's aware of how much she means to him :D

[ihearttvsnark]

Hahaha, that's Clark. Always saying the wrong thing...Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed Ollie's curiosity and his true feelings. He definitely knows how important she is to him. Thanks for reading. :)

[danisige]

Amazing!!!!

Loved all the interactions. Oliver watching Bart flirting with Chloe and she trying to show Bart that they have nothing in common and Oliver enjoying seeing this, was great. Clark and Lois were great too, as always Clark is very confusing and Lois fascinated by the Clark's muscles, lol she ends up confusing him even more. The chat between Chloe and Lois was very good, Lois still dazed by the memory of the Clark's biceps and Chloe doesn't want to leave Oliver, she wants this Oliver all the time. Loved knowing that Clark still helping Oliver and they're somehow establishing a friendship. And Oliver confessed to Clark that he has feelings for Chloe, he wants her, but he wants her to want this version of him, he's right on track... I loved it. :D

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this. All the characters definitely have a lot going on. Lois and Clark are both confused about each other as are Chlollie at this point. Ollie knows what he wants and Chloe actually does too...she's just not ready to realize it, let alone admit it.

[ica013]

the Chloe and Oliver bits were perfect as always showing the progression and at least Olivers intentions. But the bits that made me laugh Clois! and I am loving this version of Clark...

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed Chlollie and Clois. I'm happy you like Clark too...I tried to take the better parts of him for his AU self.

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks, Kayla. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

[madlenita]

Wow, ending of this chapter: just wow....
I definitelly didn't expected this....

And about Clois, Lois go stright from yelling to write her adress and dinner: well i can see "typical Lois behavior" in this...

Thanks for this chapter and of course i waiting for next!!!!

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! I'm glad it was unexpected. It was a little bit for Ollie too; at least saying it out loud was. Hahaha, that's why I love Lois. She doesn't waste time.