All the Right Moves 4/10

[ihearttvsnark]

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[sxymami0909]

Okay I know I already said this, but do you remember how I said the last chapter was my favorite? I lied it's totally this scene right here

[ihearttvsnark]

Cori, if I didn't know better, I'd say that you have some feelings for this story. LMAO. I ♥ you. Thank you so much for all the lovely compliments. :)

Chloe definitely needed to be the first one to see Ollie in all his glory. *smirks* Glad you enjoyed Ollie too and the little bit of nerves he's got happening.

It means a lot that you're enjoying Clois so much. I miss them lately so I like writing this AU version and I don't want to take away from Chlollie, but I want them to have their little side story too. And yeah, Chlollie is totally onto them.

As always, I'm happy that you're not going to attempt to murder me over the pacing. Hahaha. Poor Ollie. He keeps getting slapped back (pun totally intended) but no worries...he's going to start getting more aggressive in his pursuit very soon.

Again, thank you so much. I'm happy you love this as much as you do. ♥

[sxymami0909]

PS. I do have feelings for this story. It's right up there with the new coffee maker. I want to marry them both. LMAO

[ihearttvsnark]

Awww. ♥ That's a huge compliment.

[greenteam4ever]

I like it that Clark here is definitely way too confident than his alter version :) And this relationship he has with Lois somehow reminds me of Chloe's and Oliver's super-secret, no strings attached, friends with benefits relationships.
It's interesting to watch Chloe admiring Oliver and Oliver wanting to be closer to Chloe but both not acknowledging even the possibility of each other's feelings. It that makes sense LOL
So glad you've updated! I have an exam tomorrow, but I couldn't help myself - I had to read that chapter!)))Amazing as always, thanks!
Now I'm back to studying...
Hope to see the continuation soon! =*

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying Clark. He is a lot less bumbling farm boy here...most of the time. Exactly. Clois are doing the no-strings-attached thing for now. ;) I'm happy you liked Chloe admiring Oliver and both of them ignoring the awkwardness instead of acting on it...for now. Aw! Good luck on your exam.

[greenteam4ever]

Thanks, I've passed it successfully today!
I like this "for now" thing ;)) It's clear they can't ignore it forever

[ihearttvsnark]

Congrats! And you're right; they can't (and won't) ignore it forever.

[hellzz_on_earth]

I'm about as patient as Oliver is, but he does have a point with taking it slow with Chloe. He freaked up and has to prove himself to her, which he is doing. Oh man cannot wait for him to actually start patrolling with Chloe on the com. Should make for some interesting convo between the two. lol
Loved Chloe being the first one Ollie showed his suit too and her reaction was classic. There is no way Chlo can stop feeling anything for the man. She'd have to be insane. lol
Lois and Clark are hysterical and even more so is that Chloe and Oliver figured them out. Can't wait to read Chlois' reaction to their non-secret relationship. lol
Anohter great update as always TY.
Happy writing.

[ihearttvsnark]

Patience is overrated. LMAO. I have zero. But yes, he does need to take things slow because he has to earn her trust and he's really starting to. The next step for him will be getting her to see him differently which brings me to your next point. Chloe feels more for him than she's willing to admit, even to herself. But Ollie's lack of patience might get her there faster. ;) Glad you enjoyed the Clois stuff too. Thanks so much for all the comments. :)

[hellzz_on_earth]

Well Chloe does need a little push sometimes lol.

[xtremeroswellia]

Heehee. Her reaction to seeing him in his costume was pretty much what my reaction would have been, except she didn't drool. :P

Oh, Clois. Why do you bother pretending? Such a waste of good make out time! And they're SO transparent.

I did feel bad for Ollie when Chloe told him she slapped the other him for kissing her. But I don't blame Chloe either. Anyway. Can't wait for more!

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks, Angie! Um, yeah, Chloe held in the drool, but I wouldn't have either. Then again, if I were Chloe, I'd already have gotten naked with him, so I guess that says something about her self-control. LMAO. Clois really think they're fooling people. Or at least Lois does...I know! Poor Ollie. I felt bad for him too but Chloe was definitely justified at the time.

[mrsoqueen]

i really love this chapter, its my favourite one so far!

i loved Chloe's reaction to seeing Oliver in the uniform, it just felt so right that she was the first person to see him in it! i SO would have checked him out too! and i loved them talking about the almost kiss and the slap at the end, but i sort of felt sorry for him. I would love to see Chloe find out about the real reason why Oliver married Tess though.

and the Clois part surprised me because i didnt expect it to happen so soon, but it was really really good! i love how them two have already got it on whilst Chloe and Oliver have just about become close lol.

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that. *nods* I definitely wanted Chloe to see him before he started going out in public. (That sounds weird, but you know what I mean). Ha! Chloe has all kinds of self-restraint because I probably would have jumped on him. Chloe actually does know the real reason he married Tess. The other Oliver told her in ELM. What she still doesn't know is where Ollie's hatred for the Luthors came from and why he spun out of control. That's something she'll find out eventually. Yay! I'm glad Clois surprised you. I wanted them to be the opposite of Chlollie, who are taking things slow and cautious while Clois are just sort of recklessly going for it.