Absolutely wonderful!!! I just adore how you fill in the blanks with Chlollie goodness. They are awesome. Makes me miss them even more. lol Thank you so much for sharing.
I always wonder why they didn't let you write that show, because there's so many things missing and you always write them and they are always perfect, I would love to see a scene like this one on the show, and it wouldn't be just a luxury, this is the kind of scene the show needed.
I will never get tired to compliment the way you write the characters, you get inside their heads, you always have them reacting exactly how they would react. You're awesome, sister.
Aw, thank you, sister. Probably because I would have made Clark the supporting, supporting character. LMAO. I know they only had so much time and space for the finale, but I really thought we should have gotten to see Chlollie discuss the darkness. It was one of those storylines that they sort of just threw in there and didn't bother to resolve. Sort of like Ollie coming out as Green Arrow. *sigh* Sorry. It's been awhile since I've ranted about Smallville. ;) I'm really happy that you liked this. You're awesome too, sister. ♥
Normally reading other authors' stuff interferes with my own writing, but my own writing has been going so slowly this week I thought reading a good one-shot might give me a much-needed kick in the pants. :)
I loved this--this whole part was so rushed through on the show, and everyone's thoughts and motivations for their actions were largely unexplored, so Ollie defeating the darkness was anticlimactic and unsatisfying (unconvincing, even). I love how you've filled in the gaps here: Ollie being too ashamed to tell Chloe he'd been infected; Chloe reassuring him that she understood it was his love for her that made him vulnerable in the first place, and also reassuring him that he was still a hero.
Sweet and realistic. Instant canon, and takes a lot of the bad taste out of my mouth for the handwave-y way it was handled onscreen. Thanks for this, M. ♥
Aw, thanks, S! I know exactly what you mean. If it's even remotely close to anything I'm working on, I can't read it and multi-chapters are impossible for me now unless I can read them in one setting and again, it's nothing like what I'm working on. I hope your muse gets her act together.
I'm really glad you liked this and that it fixed some of canon for you. I hated the way the entire darkness storyline was handled because it was never given the right amount of attention and the ending was so ridiculous that the only reason I didn't throw stuff was because I was just relieved Chlollie were going to be okay and Ollie wouldn't have the darkness in him when the show ended. But that was the worst.
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Thank you so much for sharing.
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I will never get tired to compliment the way you write the characters, you get inside their heads, you always have them reacting exactly how they would react. You're awesome, sister.
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I loved this--this whole part was so rushed through on the show, and everyone's thoughts and motivations for their actions were largely unexplored, so Ollie defeating the darkness was anticlimactic and unsatisfying (unconvincing, even). I love how you've filled in the gaps here: Ollie being too ashamed to tell Chloe he'd been infected; Chloe reassuring him that she understood it was his love for her that made him vulnerable in the first place, and also reassuring him that he was still a hero.
Sweet and realistic. Instant canon, and takes a lot of the bad taste out of my mouth for the handwave-y way it was handled onscreen. Thanks for this, M. ♥
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I'm really glad you liked this and that it fixed some of canon for you. I hated the way the entire darkness storyline was handled because it was never given the right amount of attention and the ending was so ridiculous that the only reason I didn't throw stuff was because I was just relieved Chlollie were going to be okay and Ollie wouldn't have the darkness in him when the show ended. But that was the worst.
Thanks again! ♥
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