We're going to get back to how hot the sexytimes were in a minute, first I need to comment on the conversation at the end. I honestly think it might be my favorite out of the whole story so far and yes, I'm aware I say that all the time. But seriously I love how there's no panic and she's just watching him sleep. The teasing between them is sweet, but the best part by far is what they both admitted. That, that first night they had both felt something, a pull to the other.
I think that' really telling and I love that they were honest and both admitted that. *happy sigh* Also the smut was so, so hot lol. I think you captured them both so well in this. I hate when people write Chloe being the aggressor when it comes to their first time together, because it typically just isn't in character for her. I think you captured her insecurities well, but at the same time didn't go overboard with it and that's one of the things I love with your writing. This was a great end to the chapter, M ♥
Aw, thanks, C! ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed the conversation and I don't mind at all that you say that in every chapter. It makes me happy. :) Chloe's not panicking at this point because she finally admitted that he's what she wants. But of course she's still Chloe so...it'll happen.
Yay, thanks! Glad you thought it was hot and showed their personalities...that seems like a weird sentence but you know what I mean and I know what you meant. Yeah, this Chloe isn't anymore sexually experienced than canon!Chloe so she's not going to be all seductive and Ollie might have been a bit of (total) manwhore in the past, but Chloe means everything to him and he wants to show her that so I'm glad that came across. Thanks again.
Aww I'm a puddel of goo on the floor, they are so damn right together!
I looved their honest talk. Some of my favourite Chlollie moments are when they finally open up to each other and tell how they really feel. And they did yay, so much sweet fluffyness *happy sigh*
And the beginning dang! So unbelievable hot, and still you manage to show their vulnerabel sides and how they just long to be together. And what can I say but I want one of those *points to Oliver* LOL!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the quick update, you just made a snowy cold day soo much better..;))))))))))
Aw, thanks! I'm glad I could make your cold, snowy day better. ♥ I'm really happy you liked their talk. I agree that's one of the best things about Chlollie is how honest they can be with each other. Glad you enjoyed the smutty stuff too. ;) And I totally agree. I'd like an Oliver too, please.
Sweet and hot.:) Their conversation was very good, Ollie opened up once more to her and said he wants to stay with her, for real and Chloe admitted that he always attracted her in some way, for who he really is. Very good chapter.:)
That was fantastic! And that talk the morning after..it was great! One of things I like the most about Chloe and Oliver is their honesty towards each other. Thanks for posting :) I love this story so much and it sad to aknowledge that it's coming to an end...
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this and their morning after talk. Aw, that's sweet. I love this story too, but if it makes you feel better, there's a sequel to it. ;)
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I think that' really telling and I love that they were honest and both admitted that. *happy sigh* Also the smut was so, so hot lol. I think you captured them both so well in this. I hate when people write Chloe being the aggressor when it comes to their first time together, because it typically just isn't in character for her. I think you captured her insecurities well, but at the same time didn't go overboard with it and that's one of the things I love with your writing. This was a great end to the chapter, M ♥
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Yay, thanks! Glad you thought it was hot and showed their personalities...that seems like a weird sentence but you know what I mean and I know what you meant. Yeah, this Chloe isn't anymore sexually experienced than canon!Chloe so she's not going to be all seductive and Ollie might have been a bit of (total) manwhore in the past, but Chloe means everything to him and he wants to show her that so I'm glad that came across. Thanks again.
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I looved their honest talk. Some of my favourite Chlollie moments are when they finally open up to each other and tell how they really feel. And they did yay, so much sweet fluffyness *happy sigh*
And the beginning dang! So unbelievable hot, and still you manage to show their vulnerabel sides and how they just long to be together. And what can I say but I want one of those *points to Oliver* LOL!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the quick update, you just made a snowy cold day soo much better..;))))))))))
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Very good chapter.:)
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Amazing chapter :)
Fave lines :
“It’s okay if the décor is more interesting to you than I am at the moment. That’s not offensive,”
“What’s on your mind, Chloe?” he asked; his voice hoarse from sleep.
“I think you might know me too well, Mr. Queen,” Chloe teased"
“So you wanted to sleep with me when you met me but then you didn’t once you got to me until you did again and now here we are.”
“That’s very cute,”
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Thanks for posting :)
I love this story so much and it sad to aknowledge that it's coming to an end...
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