oh, this chapter was sad :( and this line : “Why are you even with me?” broke my heart. Poor Ollie... and poor Chloe :/ Chlo-Lo was awesome, as always :D I can't wait for the last chapter ! :)
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“Hey,” he said, his mood instantly brightening as he dropped the bag he was carrying on the floor and moved toward her. “Hi,” Chloe replied, getting to her feet so she could hug him. Chloe wrapped her arms around his neck and held onto him, standing on her toes to press a kiss to the sensitive spot beneath his ear. “I missed you,” she said. Oliver wrapped his arms around her waist, lifting her off her feet as he held her body tightly against his. “I missed you too,” he replied.
“I’d say that sounds pretty ambitious, Mr. Queen. Didn’t you say something about being exhausted?” she teased. “That doesn’t ring a bell,” Oliver replied.
"I know how selfish that is but I’m afraid of losing him,” Chloe admitted.
For me this was a great chapter to show Ollie's progress..He is in a relationship with Chloe and his comment about him wanting to spend his time talking to his girlfriend (rather than the mission) to me shows how far emotionally he has come and that she is important to him. Also that he has that much faith in himself, his abilities and the team of guys he works with to run the mission. Although i am sure that he wished things with Chloe had been better before he left. I am confident he could still be "Green Arrow" and get the mission done. Ubber proud he made the changes necessary to be that guy
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Thank you! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this and you can see how much Ollie has grown in basically every aspect of his life. He has opened his eyes and figured out that there's a lot more to him than just a spoiled billionaire.
You're right about Chloe too. She hasn't completely come out of her shell yet even though Ollie has forced her out on occasion. She's stubborn and she's controlling (which isn't always bad, but it's not really good for personal growth) and she hasn't really figured out how to get out of her bubble yet. But she will.
Glad you liked the Chlo-Lo. I always enjoy writing their relationship.
Oh those pigheaded stupid kids with their miscommunication and the talking around in circles without actually telling each other what they're really thinking and feeling... which makes for an awesome story, mind you. :) Great chapter, Mandy, and yay for Lois being the truthspeaker, cutting through all the bullshit and making Chloe realize she needs to be honest with Ollie. Can't wait for the last chapter, though I'm already a bit sad that this story is ending.
Aw, thanks, Tissa. Miscommunication is always their downfall. I'm glad you're enjoying this. Lois is definitely good at being the one to put things in perspective. Happy you're looking forward to the next chapter. :)
It was so sad: the chlollie fight, then the chlo-lo fight and then this ending... "She was too late"... He left for this mission thinking she didn't trust him.:( But I'm sure everything is going to be okay. They love each other. It's indeniable.
Only one chapter left! I can't believe it. I love this fic and this AU so much. Can't wait to read it!
Thanks for the comments! They do love each other so things will work out eventually. They just need to be honest. Aw, I'm glad you're excited for the last chapter and it makes me happy that you're enjoying this so much. :)
For some reason i didnt get an alert that you updated. I stumbled upon the update on Tumblr. Good thing too cause I absolutely love this. And now we are down to one more chapter to go. I can´t wait to see what goes on.
I'm sorry; that's my fault. I posted this when I was on my way out the door and forgot to post it at the Chlollie com. I realized it a few days later and it seemed sort of silly to do it then. Thanks for the comments! I'm glad you're enjoying this. :)
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Chlo-Lo was awesome, as always :D
I can't wait for the last chapter ! :)
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“Hey,” he said, his mood instantly brightening as he dropped the bag he was carrying on the floor and moved toward her.
“Hi,” Chloe replied, getting to her feet so she could hug him.
Chloe wrapped her arms around his neck and held onto him, standing on her toes to press a kiss to the sensitive spot beneath his ear. “I missed you,” she said. Oliver wrapped his arms around her waist, lifting her off her feet as he held her body tightly against his. “I missed you too,” he replied.
“I’d say that sounds pretty ambitious, Mr. Queen. Didn’t you say something about being exhausted?” she teased.
“That doesn’t ring a bell,” Oliver replied.
"I know how selfish that is but I’m afraid of losing him,” Chloe admitted.
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You're right about Chloe too. She hasn't completely come out of her shell yet even though Ollie has forced her out on occasion. She's stubborn and she's controlling (which isn't always bad, but it's not really good for personal growth) and she hasn't really figured out how to get out of her bubble yet. But she will.
Glad you liked the Chlo-Lo. I always enjoy writing their relationship.
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"She was too late"...
He left for this mission thinking she didn't trust him.:(
But I'm sure everything is going to be okay. They love each other. It's indeniable.
Only one chapter left! I can't believe it. I love this fic and this AU so much.
Can't wait to read it!
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