OMG, M! That was so good! A perfect ending to this story!
I'm so glad she wound up staying at Oliver's apartment and that she finally opened up and told Ollie how she felt and why she didn't want him going in the first place. I was all proud of her! And then Oliver telling her he loved her! OMG that was so perfect. I really love how you write them. You always do such a great job of getting into their heads and making me feel what they feel. It's hard for a lot of people to capture that level of emotion without writing Chlolloe OOC which you never do LOL.
I like how you cleared the air between them and got everything out in the open and they were totally going to have some sex HAHA. Made of awesome. <3
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Aw, C. Thank you. ♥ I'm still feeling sad that this is over but I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you liked the make up scene and for saying that. Characterization is everything in fanfic.
Hahahaha...it is always Chlollie who gets caught but Clois are pretty frisky in this story. I hope you didn't share why you were laughing with your grandma. I don't want her judging me. LMAO.
Lois has to be with Clark. It's how it works, no matter what universe. I'm happy you liked the Chlo-Lo scene and the Ollie/Clark one. It was important to me to write their friendship as believable in this universe since it never really felt that way on the show and it could have been epic.
Awwwwwww, I'm sad it's over, but at the same time, I'm really happy, because it ended perfectly. And there's another one coming, so I don't have that many reasons to be sad.
I was reading this and thinking about the first chapter of ELM, how Oliver is so much better than he used to be, how good choices make all the difference. This was perfect, the pacing was flawless, the changes in his life were beliavable. And Chloe falling in love with him too, it was not rushed, it was just perfect.
Everything about this chapter was perfect and adorable, Clois, Lois moving to Metropolis, her talk with Chloe, the fact that Lois and Ollie don't exactly hate each other anymore. And Chlollie, they are perfect together, in every universe.
I'm sad too, sister. But thank you! I'm glad you thought it ended perfectly. There is another one coming, but it's going to have to get in line behind TVD fic, not that I think you'll mind that too much. ;)
Aw, thanks. I'm glad you can appreciate the pacing. I tried to keep it realistic and not just have them instantly be in love because no one changes that fast, not for real. I'm so happy you liked this since you totally started this entire thing with your idea. You're the best. ♥
Love how everything all came together in the end, and Lois finally admitting how she feels about Clark too. Oliver's thoughts on Clark and his reaffirming their friendship was really sweet. Wonderfully written.
I'm so happy with the way this ended. It's been such a great fic seeing how Chloe and Oliver reach a place where they are finally happy together, even with a totally different history. They really are fated for each other like Oliver said when he crossed universes.
Aw, thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed the ending. Canon!Ollie had a point. These two belong together. Thanks so much for all your comments and I'm glad you're looking forward to the next one. :)
One Republic are the "it" Chlollie Muse! Nicely finished story, the Clois was great but what I really liked was the ClarkOllie bromance. Looking forward to the sequel and glad that Chlollie still inspire you.
For me, absolutely. I'm going to need them to do another album so I have more song choices. ;) Thanks so much for the comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this and that you're looking forward to the next sequel.
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I'm so glad she wound up staying at Oliver's apartment and that she finally opened up and told Ollie how she felt and why she didn't want him going in the first place. I was all proud of her! And then Oliver telling her he loved her! OMG that was so perfect. I really love how you write them. You always do such a great job of getting into their heads and making me feel what they feel. It's hard for a lot of people to capture that level of emotion without writing Chlolloe OOC which you never do LOL.
I like how you cleared the air between them and got everything out in the open and they were totally going to have some sex HAHA. Made of awesome. <3 ( ... )
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Hahahaha...it is always Chlollie who gets caught but Clois are pretty frisky in this story. I hope you didn't share why you were laughing with your grandma. I don't want her judging me. LMAO.
Lois has to be with Clark. It's how it works, no matter what universe. I'm happy you liked the Chlo-Lo scene and the Ollie/Clark one. It was important to me to write their friendship as believable in this universe since it never really felt that way on the show and it could have been epic.
Chlollie. ♥ Thanks again for all the love, C.
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I was reading this and thinking about the first chapter of ELM, how Oliver is so much better than he used to be, how good choices make all the difference. This was perfect, the pacing was flawless, the changes in his life were beliavable. And Chloe falling in love with him too, it was not rushed, it was just perfect.
Everything about this chapter was perfect and adorable, Clois, Lois moving to Metropolis, her talk with Chloe, the fact that Lois and Ollie don't exactly hate each other anymore. And Chlollie, they are perfect together, in every universe.
This was great, can't wait for the sequel.
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Aw, thanks. I'm glad you can appreciate the pacing. I tried to keep it realistic and not just have them instantly be in love because no one changes that fast, not for real. I'm so happy you liked this since you totally started this entire thing with your idea. You're the best. ♥
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I can't wait for the next story in the series!!
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