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ihearttvsnark

Hold It Against Me 3/3

Jul 07, 2013 19:05

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title: hold it against me, pairing: chloe and oliver, smallville, fanfiction

Comments 27

hellzz_on_earth July 8 2013, 16:25:32 UTC

You knew Chloe and Lois would rectify Ollie's guilt prob and what better way then to insinuate Lo on the shopping for baby trip. lol
I couldn't stop laughing myself.
Chloe was so sweet keeping Ollie calm. Chlollie are just adorable all the way around and they're going to be parents!!! Oh I hope we get to find out the baby's name sometime down the line?
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing.

ihearttvsnark July 9 2013, 17:52:45 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Chloe was all about taking charge and calming her cousin down. Glad you enjoyed Chlollie too.

scout09 July 8 2013, 17:16:13 UTC

Hahahaha so much love for this! Love that Chloe knew she needed to intervene, love that Lois was willing to back off in such an awesome way, and loved that Oliver was willing to assist Lois with a little B&E, but when it comes to a clown lamp for his kid he draws the line, dammit! And how right he is - clowns are terrifying. This was delightful - thanks for sharing!

ihearttvsnark July 9 2013, 17:53:18 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed the story.

faby87 July 8 2013, 17:29:24 UTC

HAhahah this was very funny, I love the Sullivan-Lane team when it comes into action!!
Thank you for this fic I absolutely loved it !!

ihearttvsnark July 9 2013, 17:53:53 UTC

Aw, thanks for reading! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

artgirltx July 8 2013, 18:13:28 UTC

I love, love, love pregnant Chlollie fics. They just make me happy, and you write some of the best.

Nice that she didn't have the crazy mood swings the entire shopping trip. I'm with Ollie - angry is better than tears.

And I loved Lois picking red and blue for the bedding and curtains. Of course that would be the straw that broke the camel's back for him. Nice move, Lois.

ihearttvsnark July 9 2013, 17:54:51 UTC

Aw, thank you! That's very sweet. Chloe was trying to keep her emotions in check and enjoy herself. Yeah, Ollie could only take so much and that was it. Thanks again for reading!

chlollifan84 July 8 2013, 19:28:34 UTC

This ending was absolutely P.E.R.F.E.C.T!!
This part about Chloe feeling like a beached whale was hilarious.
I loved this story very much! Thanks for sharing it with us.

ihearttvsnark July 9 2013, 17:55:42 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!