This is the first poem I've written since grade 11 English class

[ihoshka]

Title: These Eyes
Character: Carey Price
Rating: G
Author Notes: A poem for solidland, who made me inspired me to write this.

Comments

[solidland]

*claps*

BRAVA

YOU ARE VERY GOOD AT POEMS

[ihoshka]

Haha. I'm not so sure about that BUT THANK YOU. *bows*

[ihoshka]

Thank you! I originally tried to write something amusingly bad, then it just turned ghastly, period, then it morphed into this, which is... as promised, uh, something. :)

[ihoshka]

Thank you! I still cannot believe I wrote a poem. A poem about Carey Price's eyes.

WHERE DOES MY LIFE GO FROM HERE?

[northern_star]

WHERE DOES MY LIFE GO FROM HERE?

Straight to heaven. Clearly. ;)

[ihoshka]

HAHA. Triple low five for St. Peter.

[northern_star]

<333 This is gorgeous!

:D

[ihoshka]

Aw, I'm blushing.

[cccccontroversy]

GREAT POEM

I LIKE THE PART ABOUT HIS EYES

[ihoshka]

THANKS. :D

I WAS WORRIED MAYBE THAT PART WAS TOO SUBTLE, SO I'M GLAD THAT CAME THROUGH FOR YOU.