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Drabble

Sep 04, 2006 18:12

Title: Touch
Author: iisrealsmart
Characters: House and Wilson
Rating: PG, I guess. Depends on how you interpret the word touch.
Word Count: 100 for each drabble
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: They are not mine.
A/N: My first attempts at writing. These and the next few things were a welcome home present for lilallisun. She made me get them beta'd to post. Thank ( Read more... )

Comments 6

alsaurusrex September 4 2006, 22:51:55 UTC

Yay you got it.
I do love them. : )

And look, you mentioned me. *iz speshal*

axmxz September 4 2006, 22:52:51 UTC

Sounds to me like they need some booze, and there will be cuddles on the couch. :)

iisrealsmart September 4 2006, 22:56:25 UTC

There should ALWAYS be cuddles on the couch. And if the booze helps it be so? Fine by me.

great! jammasterjer08 January 6 2007, 04:15:37 UTC

this is really good for you claimed first attempt. very literate and good story. u get 4 stars.

woodencoyote January 7 2007, 01:12:52 UTC

Its good. The only issue I have is that the word "touch" is repeated a little too much. While its important to the feel of the piece, put between sentances it breaks the rhythm.

iisrealsmart January 7 2007, 21:23:10 UTC

Thank you for your input; I see that the repetition may make it choppier than I intended.