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[ijiified]

They're on opposite sides of the door. It's dark but it's early and Daesung and Yongbae and Seunghyun senior are out doing something actually not work-related for once in their lives. Seungri and Jiyong are home and what they're doing doesn't really have to do with work either.

What they're doing is sitting with their back's to the thin wood

Comments

[raid_kun]

First?

Sorry for stealing first spot if so but ASHGJHKJLJL THIS WAS WAY TOO HOT AND GOOD ON SO MANY LEVELS. ROAR.

[ijiified]

FUCK HOW DID YOU KNOW SHIT. -________- this really wasn't meant to be read.

whoops.

uhm, thkx?

[oxygenlove]

IKNOERITE????
ROARS WITH YOU

[oxygenlove]

Okay so, after reading this I scrolled down to click 'Leave a comment' but my mouse pointer missed (no, my hand wasn't shaking, the mouse pointer just missed!) so I tried again and got it the second time.

Then I position my fingers on the keyboard but... I spent an entire minute (maybe more) just staring at the keys and not typing anything. Words just escaped me.

After that I stand up and decided I needed to go to the bathroom. I spent some good 5 minutes or so there just spacing out and looking at the mirror.

After that I open Pingus (my fave Linux game) and try to save penguins from dying.

Then I open my browser again and try to reply for the second time.

JKSKLASKASKYJSAHJKHDJHJHDJDSJHJSJSHAHAAJSJASAHSHAJHSASS
THIS IS SO DAMN FUCKING HOTNESS OVERLOADED WITH SMUT AND SWEETNESS AND DAMN YOU WHY ARE YOU SO MUCH WIN?

The many reasons why oxygenlove is marrying this Fic/Drabble/OmghfgGRIpwnsallStory:

1. Ji and Ri are so fucking real. I've read a lot of fics that I love mainly because the author kept the members' personality intact

[ijiified]

Lol, ILU. I wrote this and I was so tired and out of it, ugh. -___-; And yet you like it. Yay!

@1: Thanks, Ji is so hard for me, as I'm sure you can tell. I like to think I've improved a bit from my first fics after I got my brain around the whole G-ri relationship. I think your fics helped a lot, btw. XD I still haven't read Songs 5, but I'll get right on that. :O

@3: Ri I tend to make ghei/pathetic and/or angry, so I made him a little cuter here.

@4: YAH I KNO RITE! I really did not intend to write this, I dunno....

@5: GUESS LOL.

@6: I know. I debated for a bit whether or not to keep that in the end, because it kinda screws them over, but I just really wanted to. And I guess they wanted to, lol.

@7: You are a wonderful dork, also amazing. hahahahaha I can't believe you quoted all that.

In the end, thank you. I might actually post it since you seem to like it. I'll check with Raid-kun for beta-ing. <3

[raid_kun]

D:

But I feel like a bitch after betaing fics. Because I'm really bad with tact. D:

[the_nez]

<3 Tact is for losers. XD.

[pumpkin_bread]

Thank you

[the_nez]

Hey you. I haven't seen you around, and then you go and post this butt-fuck long post.

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.... <3. Hey.

Anyways, thanks, I really appreciate the comment. I feel very similarly about Seungri, and I think as a character and a person he's very dynamic.

Jiyong is just strange and freaky. Also, don't go and give me strange ideas like that, it leads me down long and dark roads and away from the multitude of fics I need to finish. .__o derf.

<3 again.

[pumpkin_bread]

I'm ninja like that.

You don't see me and then all of a sudden it's like, WHAM, BAM, KAPOW, and you're seeing stars and stuff.

You're welcome, you deserve it. :)

[oxygenlove]

I love this comment because of the way you described Ri and Ji's relationship as controlled and broken and cycled, the way you think that they understand each other, think that Ji's the only one who really understands Ri. I love love love how you think Ji will be the only one to undo Ri, and how Ri will just be closed up to anybody else. Also, I love how you see their relationship as tension-filled but bittersweet.

We think alike.

And yes, if it comes to tension-filled-angst, this girl here is the only one who can do it. She invented GRI angst.

[mtfanatic]

OMFG
This was fantastic
Like seriously

There are no words to describe how much i loved this fic
It was pure brilliance
Why can I actually picture this happening?

G/Ri is just... ugh
their relationship is amazing
one of the bets i have come across
and you captured them so well
great job sweetheart

((Its 330 am for me right now and I should be asleep since I have class in the morning but I can't sleep so I am playing around on LJ and found this))

[the_nez]

lolz,thanks a bunch. Yeah I wrote this at about 330 am, I think it suits that time period for reading (The semiconscious state LOL)

[ilds]

wow!!1 soo many long comments and i can definetly not write as long as them
but all i have to say is I LOVE IT!!!!!
OMG I REALLY DOO!!!!
SOOOO CREATIVE!

[the_nez]

Tis fine. It's not how big it is, it's what you do with it. -_~*