[FIC]Enough (G-ri)
Title: Enough
Rating: R for brief smut
Pairings: G-ri
Summary: In which Jiyong and Seungri are entirely too overdramatic ( Read more... )
Rating: R for brief smut
Pairings: G-ri
Summary: In which Jiyong and Seungri are entirely too overdramatic ( Read more... )
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this was so intense and twisted and beautiful.
i think you should continue to write more crap LOL.
i loved it sooo much. it almost made me tear up a bit ;(
especially the way jiyong is so patient, and always smiling.. and then he just
finally cracks, and you can just feel the emotion.
i love the way you wrote it, it had a very raw and real feeling to it.
And no, you don't know or want to hear this, see this Jiyong, and you try to turn your face but he catches you, thumb and forefinger grabbing your jaw hard enough to bruise and forcing you to look. His eyes trap yours.
“I've always done everything you wanted, been happy with whatever I could get,” he whispers, loosening his grip to rub a soft thumb against your lips. It's cold. “And I know you're a fucking idiot sometimes, and that was okay, too. I played your games, and I let you run away when you got scared. I gave you everything.”
that part is so algskjalkshglahgs .. brilliant . :)
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Wish I could say more, but I'm needed right now O_O By my annoying brother
~ thanks for writing
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THIS WAS AMAZING. AMAZING. AMAAAAZZZINNNGGG.
HOLY CRAPPPP O_O
I WANNA READ IT AGAIN!!! >V<
HAHAAHAHAH!
awwwww gd! seungri!!
love itttt!!
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What do you mean it's 'kinda crap!?' This is amazing! I had to read it twice before I could believe what I was reading, haha!
A quirk in the smiling lips, almost surprise, flits across Jiyong's face, but what comes out of his mouth is simply -...
...You stand there, frozen, expecting a 'why' or a 'what' or even maybe a 'fuck no' but there's nothing, only cool silence as Jiyong looks at you nonchalantly.
I'm so drawn towards this part of the fic. The expressions that you describe Ji going through seems just so clear, and is just so easy to imagine.
“I've always done everything you wanted, been happy with whatever I could get,” he whispers, loosening his grip to rub a soft thumb against your lips. It's cold. “And I know you're a fucking idiot sometimes, and that was okay, too. I played your games, and I let you run away when you got scared. I gave you everything.”
He pauses, letting his thumb slip beneath your lips to press against slick teeth.
“But I'm done, Maknae.”!!! This is possibly my most favourite ( ... )
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