[FIC] Of Kids and the Stupid Things They Do (G-Ri)

[ijiified]

Title: Of Kids and the Stupid Things They Do
Rating: R for brief smut
Pairings: G-ri
Summary: Jiyong loves Seungri. Seungri tries. Sadness ensues.

Yay for writing something I almost kind of like. Warning, it's a little bit sad.

Should be out with the 4th chapter of 'Break' soon, for anyone who cares. >_> Drunk, what's that?

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Comments

[oxygenlove]

The... longing in this is amazing. The way Ji is so in love with Ri and wants him so bad, needs him so bad, like fucking want to feel his touch, his heart in his hands... he doesn't succumb to his needs because.. he loves Ri so much to break Ri, to make Ri do something he knows Ri will regret later, or to make Ri do something he knows the kid doesn't really want.

Or does Ri?

It's like... he's so willing to hurt himself, so willing to break himself just to keep Ri safe, to keep Ri safe and okay.

This is just....

I WUB WUB WUB WUB YOU....!!!!!!!!
<3memmed

AND YEAH!
My heart really just ached at this part:

“Nng, I love you so much, Seungri.” I'm sorry, I'm sorry, God I'm so sorry -

A pause, too long, “I love you too... Jiyong.” And he presses forward, slowly, panting wet heat and Jiyong promises himself just this once. 'I won't do it again, I won't.'

And he prays for god to forgive him.

[ijiified]

<3 yay for your comments that make me so happy. As usual, you really caught the Ji I wanted to put out there. >_< I really tried to put myself into Jiyong's POV, and the result:

I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT SEUNGRI REALLY FEELS. UGH. I mean, I know he really cares about Jiyong. I know he felt a little reluctance and a little fear. I know he doesn't love Jiyong exactly the same way. BUT BUT BUT that doesn't mean he DOESN'T love Jiyong either. I don't understand RI at all. And Ji does stupid conflicting shit too.

I totally want to see what you write and your take on it, cuz it's irritating.

>:o damnit.

[oxygenlove]

ROFL.
I only give amazing comments on amazing fics :)

Yes, Ji here is so amazing but Ri's character and the way he's written is also very 3 dimensional. It's like, everything can be written just from this short scene between them. I can see Ri's feelings here so clearly, I don't know why but I do..

I'll just write it when I get home..I hope.. it comes out okay and I get to finish it...!!!!

[ijiified]

I WANT IT. GIVE IT TO ME NOW.

[maomao4ever]

i read this yesterday
and was speechless
and didnt wanna say something stupid and make a fool out of myself XD

so i read it again today
and was hoping i can come up with something just a bit intelligent to say?
but obviously I.FAIL.
im still very much incoherent...

so forgive me???

love u (and ur fics) a very inappropriate amount =P

[ijiified]

>:O INAPPROPRIATE!
<3

[maomao4ever]

;D

[ijiified]

Your icon makes me inappropriately happy.

in the pants

[oxygenlove]

i am seriously having a hard time writing my own version of this. i cannot find any holes to poke at so i can make Ji and Ri really in love with each other. Well, I did but when i read it in my draft it sounds weird.

I'll try again...

cause this is just soo.... you know.
awesome.

[ijiified]

HAHAHAHAH I'm basically the bringer of unhappiness, so good luck with that. <3 I finally re-read my fic and am trying to figure it out as well, so. Since it's been a while since I wrote it, I'm able to read it a bit more objectively now.

Ri really does seem like he does love Ji, kinda. but it's weird. To me it's like all Jiyong sees is this kid and Seungri doesn't want to be seen like a kid, so badly.

[oxygenlove]

Yeah. And then Ri really just loves Ji but Ji is so fucking sure that Ri does not, that Ri can't so he denies Ri's feelings and it's making Ri frustrated.

ZOMG.

[ijiified]

WE SHOULD, LIKE, WRITE A FANFICTION.

[tenshibattosai]

Okay, first of all, I would just like to say that your layout is so very pretty and blue and I love it ~&hearts

Okay... Okay... *takes a deep breath*

OH MY GODDDDDD SQ#(*TY#@F(IONWHEJFVIEWDILFKN SDILKNJF

Aigoo you make me want to tear my hair out because this is just so amazing and I have just decided that I love you so much! D:D:D:

“What did I do..?” Seungri questions, loud and abrupt in the empty air.

Guilts twists hard in Jiyong's stomach and he clenches his fist. Seungri doesn't understand but Jiyong can't possibly explain, because to explain would involve remembering and remembering was -

No.

It's like Seungri loves him in some leader-adoration way, but at the same time, not sure if it's actually love or not, or if the line between the two has been blurred so much that he's lost somewhere there. He was so willing to do anything for Ji, and poor Ji was so longing and cracked, and still managed to do what he felt was right for the maknae. *rambles on*

“Nng, I love you so much, Seungri.” I'm sorry, I'm sorry, God I'm so

[ijiified]

First of all, thanks for your comment.

Secondly

It's like Seungri loves him in some leader-adoration way, but at the same time, not sure if it's actually love or not, or if the line between the two has been blurred so much that he's lost somewhere there.

EXPLAIN TO ME HOW YOU UNDERSTAND THIS AND CAN DESCRIBE THIS BETTER THAN I CAN. RIGHT NOW.

[oxygenlove]

i was gonna put that in fic but it got lost. haha. she's awesome, right? this comment is WOAH GREAT!

[ijiified]

For serials. I just flail inarticulately, usually.

[vaneszikkipower]

REad it on the advice of Krizza (oxygenlove).
I really liked it even if it's sad.
I love this story :)
Thank you for sharing.