fic 39 - games of risk / we're taking bets [remus/sirius]

[ijustwishiwere]

title: Games of Risk / we're taking bets
fandom: Harry Potter
pairings: Remus Lupin/Sirius Black
rating: PG-13
synopsis: When Sirius kisses Remus for the first time he knows how it's going to end.
author's note: Written for barefootboys' sixth prompt, a parlour game in which players must eat raisins which are alight. Basically, it's a game in which

Comments

[goodbyesheesha]

I like this one better than the other one.

Also "the bass of his neck" is freaking awesome? Stupid ctrl+v just tried to give you the cover art for Modest Mouse's We Were Dead Before The Ship Even Sank.

It's a lot harder to comment when I'm talking to you on MSN, because I have less excuse to get ridiculously off-topic.

[ijustwishiwere]

Hurray! I feel pretty ambivalent towards it but it is more 'my style'.

And I'm so fixing that right now. I have no idea how I missed it. I was even reading a list of humourous CV typos earlier including "in my spare time I enjoy hiding my horse", "I hope to hear from you shorty" and "I am a conscious individual". Hmm.

That's probably true. But I don't mind.

[goodbyesheesha]

Oh, Iris, no! It wasn't a typo. You were merely referring to the neck of his bass!
I'm such a loser, I really am. It's really kind of pathetic, really.

Oh, hey, I'm a conscious individual! Barely, though.

I'm supposed to be responding to this while you're eating, but I don't really have anything else to say.
I cut my nails. They're really short, and it hurts to type. My fingers are touching the keys, and it's not good. At all! How do normal people do this?

[fullmoon_dreams]

I like this. I think you have captured Sirius's nervousness really well.

[passakiss]

Aw, wow. This is so sweet and heartbreaking and beautiful. I love the foreshadowing, but there's just something so realistically innocent here that I love. Great job.

[hravan_maranwe]

This is fucking awesome. It is so short (still in French Canadian mode), but it is one of my favourite pieces you have written. Honestly, I think you should tweak it and lengthen it a bit. I would suggest not lengthening it too much, as I think the concise manner of writing renders this efficient piece pithy and meaningful. Seriously, almost every word here means something. You did not waste anything, which is beautiful

[ijustwishiwere]

This comment is so awesome.♥ The piece isn't my favourite but it's really amazing to hear why you liked it. And saying that every word means something is probably one of the best compliments anyone can hope for. Thank you for making my day with this - twice. (Because reading it over to reply was just as good.)

And, seriously, everyone needs a friend like that! I've always wanted someone to pull me out of my comfort zone and who I could be completely wild and irresponsible with.

[brighterlove]

this right here ahahahhahahahha. Somehow this couple grew on me but it's hard to find decent fic for them, any recs?(feels herself getting sucked back into Hp fanfic)