[Poem] Red Ocean

Mar 23, 2011 01:23


I've written this a while ago, a few months into the lawsuit. Just wanted to share.

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Red Ocean

The rush of cheers that sweeps away my soul
brings tears into my eyes. I howl
and wail and sing my heart, and prowl
with every beat of heart. I fly
and fall, reach up and fail and yet
these people cheer and smile and wail.
I laugh, they laugh. I cry, ( Read more... )

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daemoncas5 March 25 2011, 02:18:55 UTC
sorry i just have time for commenting, read it really late last night
first for not forgetting my manner...thankyou for added me back!!!!!
im so glad that one of my fav author like what i write..it's flattering<333

oke off to th poem
boys it was beautiful and raw and though my understanding sucks big time i can feel the intensity of the feeling you put there. it's geoooorrrrgeuss i tell you. and something kinda...classic?

is it from the pov of jaechunsu, or all five members? because somehow i felt it more like dunno....maybe because all along jaechunsu is the most open about their feeling in this chaos called lawsuit >__>
but!
it's good and make me more proud of 'true' cassiopeia that didnt choose where side they'd fight with. love love love~~~

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ikangtvxq March 27 2011, 03:42:31 UTC
Sorry for the late reply! Thanks for commenting! And thanks for adding me, too, by the way ^^ Fave author? Shucks, you know how to make my day ^^

I worked on the poem within two-three days, I'm glad you like it. ^^ I had all five of them in mind, not just jaechunsu. I wrote this when I saw Red Ocean during Secret Code Tokyo Dome. I teared up when I watched the fans cheering for the boys, so I thought "How do the boys feel, watching these passionate people cheering for them?" I was so inspired by that. =)

I miss those days, when fans weren't fighting and taking sides T_T... I'm even sadder that some fans chose to bash the boys. I'm glad that there are still fans who chose to side with all of them. =)

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