The Breeders - Part One

[ilivetoplaylive]

Title: The Breeders
Chapter: Part One
Rating: Eventually NC-17 - R
Pairing: Zaylor. A/U. Zac and Taylor are brothers but that's about it.
Word Count: 2651
Note: Read at your own risk. Will eventually include implied rape, child molestation... other stuff.
A/N: I don't have the patience to proofread, I write mostly when I'm delirious in the middle

Comments

[xscreenbug_80]

yes, definitely loving this already ~ I agree with everyone else so far, your descriptions are beautifully written and I like the style

[niko622]

Im rereading of course! But it still got me like it did the first time I read it. The need to read on is definitely there. :-) you are a amazing writer.

[pompasdejabon87]

I would love to read this story! hope you can add me back!

[ilivetoplaylive]

added

[rachie_grl6]

Job testing so young seems kind of silly. Young people don't usually know what they want to do and I highly doubt a test will magically provide the answer. However I'm sur it is super relavent to this story so on I read!

I'm assuming this is written by Zac's POV? Maybe I missed it but I highly doubt Taylor would have withstood the physical labor so I'm going with Zac.

Has to be Zac - he loves to eat!!

Interesting - I suppose they were never allowed to be around the opposite sex. Curious. Makes me wonder about his parents.

Considering the story is called Breeders, I'd assume he'll be seeing a lot more women, unless of course in this world men can procreate.

LOL - jerking him off for science's sake.

Yay - Taylor!