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When Forever Won't End: Part One

Dec 12, 2013 17:57

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shewasred December 13 2013, 00:14:11 UTC

Ugh ugh ugh ugh.

As if I haven't been crying enough today! This was really just perfect, though. I mean, not perfect, but it just hit me where it fucking hurts. I know you said this isn't going to be a long one, so I'm curious to see where it goes.

ilivetoplaylive December 13 2013, 00:25:37 UTC

I'm glad you liked it or... as odd as it sounds, I'm glad it hit you where it hurts in the I'm glad my writing could impact you way. I'm thinking right now maybe 10ish parts or so. I just don't want it to get long and washed out but doesn't mean its going to be an insignificant length. :) I'll try to have the next part out sooner rather than later. Already working on it.

withasmile87 December 13 2013, 15:30:59 UTC

I just really wanna hug this Zac. He could use a good hug. I hope he eventually comes to terms with things for his own sanity.

ilivetoplaylive December 16 2013, 11:11:06 UTC

I think a hug would definitely help him. Thanks for reading!

zacgirl1 December 13 2013, 16:39:20 UTC

It's like Zac died with Kate in the accident three years ago. His desire to live has died with her, not even his son and the music brings him back . He just seems to function and cope by taking all those drugs. And that's so heartbreaking. I hope he can find his way back to life, to his family, and to his passion for music somehow.

I really liked the first part of this short story and I'm looking forward to see where it take us .

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ilivetoplaylive December 16 2013, 11:12:09 UTC

Thanks for reading! He definitely has a journey to go on to fix himself or even WANT to fix himself, that's for sure.

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ilivetoplaylive December 14 2013, 21:30:38 UTC

There always needs to be some mystery at first to get you sucked in ;) I'm sure many questions will be answered in the next chapter hopefully posted tonight or tomorrow :)

I like to add some hints of reality and the comment about Isaac was actually from the documentary you mentioned :) very observant.

I also think hanson wouldnt be hanson without any one of them. I'm sure they would be able to form another band but it would never be the same dynamic they have now for sure.

malfunkshon January 21 2014, 11:56:52 UTC

Damn this is good ( ... )