I warned you!

[illezabeth]

 

Comments

[anonymous]

Typos, run-on sentences and fanciful, pointless rubbish- you've out done yourself.

[illezabeth]

Typos and run-on sentences I can fix but fanciful, pointless rubbish is far too fun to give up.
Also, stop taking up all the space on my couch, you're becoming a permanent fixture.

[warriorbot]

I *love* your fancy, fully - but you know that anyway. "Rushed and imperfect" stitches tweak my heartstrings. The rest tugs at me in quite another way.

(By the by: I would have assumed a literary critic would know that "outdone" is one word not two?)

[illezabeth]

Thank you! I really wasn't expecting anyone to read this as it was just meant to be a rubbishy little drabble to annoy my (anti-H/W) friend who I was complaining at being bored at. I quite like it now though so it may get chopped up and assimilated into something else I'm writing at the moment. Ooo, like maybe for the slash fest?

(He said that once he'd written it and I wouldn't let him delete it and he knows better than to try and steal my baby laptop away from me XD)

[mad_pooh]

Really nice! Very.. picturable, i think.
Like it a lot :D

[illezabeth]

Haha thank you, I'm glad someone liked it ^_^

[lygtemanden]

I think the tempo suits this little piece quite nicely, I enjoyed it anyway.

Thank you for sharing it with us!

[illezabeth]

Haha you found my little bit of scrap!

Well I'm glad you enjoyed anyway ^_^ I'm thinking of working it into an actual story soon, but we'll see how it goes.

Thank you for the comment!

It is good

[floratang]

But still want more hot and longer story.

Re: It is good

[illezabeth]

Haha don't worry, this was never meant to be a complete story! Just annoying someone ^_^

[doxxed_up]

You write the best endings.

[illezabeth]

Aww thank you, sorry for the late reply - e-mail situation is tragic at the moment!