drunk!Fic: "Slightly Delirious"

Jan 24, 2010 16:43



Slightly Delirious

(Next morning no one will be able to tell exactly who left when or who did what last night.

Though; maybe, with who is not really a secret. But leave Liv to deal with that.)

By the 5th round no one is going to really agree about PJ´s shooting schedule tomorrow.

A few minutes later no one really ( Read more... )

orlijah, fic

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randomdarling January 24 2010, 18:53:07 UTC
*massive squee*

I LOVE this more than I can say. I read it, then immediately re-read it. :)

Your characters are perfect, completely perfect - wonderfully clear and individual (I adore your Ian! Oh, and your Liv! And Orlando...and Elijah...yes, them all!).

This is so stylish - your words are brilliant - "stumbletwitchydancing" and the "young and sparkly" night...it's all too beautiful.

And hot, of course. Very hot indeed. ;)

*loves completely and whole-heartedly*

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illuins_lair January 24 2010, 21:50:37 UTC
Weeei! you´re too kind sweetie! *squishes madly*

So_happy you enjoyed the ride of the sparkly!night and fell in character-lurve and some hottiness =)

(Massive Orlijah!pressure and *this* is what I come up with... no wonder I´m not really making sense even IRL) =D

AH! Dear Ian was just too fun to write, can´t belive I haven´t tried before, he always scared me a bit... *g*

*stumbletwitchydances around you*

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tweedle_ January 24 2010, 19:13:19 UTC
What a glorious drunken romp! I like to think that something very much like this must have happened during their time in NZ. Their stream of conscious thoughts are wonderful. I'd very much like to know exactly what each of them remember tomorrow. ;D

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illuins_lair January 24 2010, 22:13:50 UTC
Glad you enjoyed the tequila-race-from-hell =)*snerk*

Oh, but Of_Course it must have taken place.. *grins* But Liv was there to cover it up =)

Well, I think Elijah didn´t wake up in his trailer. Billy was probably still sleeping while having Feet glued on. Dom found some suspect bruises and traces of peanuts in his hair. Liv was croaking in such raspy elvish that Peter had to change her scenes. Orlando was blushy and clumsy and still had his jellybeanbananas-legs on. And Dear Ian mocked everyone just like he´d planned.

=D

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illuins_lair January 24 2010, 23:11:36 UTC
On second thought; I think they all, each one of them also had lots of drunken secrets - only pretending not to remember them. Tequila is soooo easy to blame...

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lisabellex January 24 2010, 20:42:18 UTC
*g*

This is absolutely unique and brilliant, and I love it. It's pure, off the cuff, stream-of consciousness drunk!fic and I didn't have to do a single thing to it! I love that the typos/grammatical errors are totally owned by the characters, and I love your newly invented words: frozenspikeyshattered (ace!) and stumbletwitchydancing (hurrah!)! They're superb.

It's super fun, very sexy and clever. Bravo!

Keep on writing!

*hugs*

:D

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illuins_lair January 24 2010, 22:34:22 UTC
Awww.. *SNOGZ* Without you I´d still be working on it until orlijah_month 2011 =)

Happy that you enjoyed the deliriousness and approve of the new Swinglish that I´m becoming very fond of! "frozenspikeyshattered" is such a totally underestimated part of a kiss!
Oh, the characters should always take the blame and it´s very convenient too!! (I think I´m going to stay with drunk!fics because of that... or maybe just because it´s too much fun to hear them slurr and stumble inside my head)*g*

So glad to finally come bearing some drunk!fic-gifts =D

*draws tequila-hearts*

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liriel1810 January 25 2010, 05:56:28 UTC
Begs the question... were you drunk when you wrote this? *g* You've captured that whole drunk and rambling and not making any sense but thinking that you are feeling very well!

Tequila is the devil's brew, though. ;)

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illuins_lair January 25 2010, 12:39:33 UTC
L!O!L! Your ICON omg...

*cough* Actually, I was incredibly sober; although I wasn´t quite sure if that was a good thing or not - very confusing at times. (Or perhaps, since they were having this party somewhere in my poor!brain I was probably affected from the amount of all the alcohol flowing around, right? I mean, I don´t even *remember* this night damnit! =DDD

*slurr*

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shrinetolust January 25 2010, 08:34:35 UTC
My goodness, I feel a little dizzy and drunk myself now...prolly helped by the fact that it's 2:30am, but most likely due to your brilliantly stumbling rambly tequila-infused narrative. :) I just read it at a breakneck pace, rolling around with the words and wondering what was going to happen (and what was actually happening, ha...especially Orli who is so perfectly random and sweet) and Liv and Ian are funny and devilish and perfect too.

Definitely a fun twist on the LOTR fic, thank you so much for sharing! And forgive any incoherence...see 2:30am...hee!

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illuins_lair January 25 2010, 13:13:36 UTC
Weeeiii! 2:30am-feedback is the bestest! Thankyou for reading! *squishes*

Hahaha..."rolling around with the words.." Now, that´s what I like!!! *stumbles*

So happy that you enjoyed agent!tyler & devilish!Ian and of course - the little Orli-bug! *HEARTS*

Tequila-drenched brainactivity can be so madly fun to keep track on, since all those tracks are crossing themselves at a speed that *may* look slow on the outside but really is at the speed of light.

I felt a bit drunk too while writing it *g*

So.. uhm - bring in da tequila, it´s Monday! =DD *lines up shot glasses on desk, next to Dom´s peanuts*

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