[Merlin] Fic: Worth Fighting For, Part I

[illusionrain]

Title: Worth Fighting For, Part I
Characters/Pairings: Arthur, mentions of Merlin, Gwen, Uther, eventual Arthur/Merlin
Rating PG
Word Count: 4,130
Warnings: Arthur’s brain brokenness.
Disclaimer: Characters, situations, etc. don’t belong to me but to BBC and Shine TV.
Summary: Our lives are often governed by unseen forces. Some of those are good, some

Comments

[dexstarr]

I rather enjoyed reading this, even though I know nothing about the Merlin fandom. I think you did a really nice job of dropping enough hints through actions and dialogue for me to get a mental picture of how the characters act. Arthur's a snot and lovable all at once!

You better write the next part of this soon, because I want to know what happens! And I was right to encourage you to keep going <3

[illusionrain]

Thank you /blushes. That quite a compliment coming from you. And I'm glad to hear it kept you interested despite not being in the Merlin fandom. Also, agreed, that's how I'd perfectly describe Arthur in one go and I'm glad it came across that way xD

I'll try my best to get it written as quickly as possible, but. You know me /takes forever sldkjfl

[glenien]

[illusionrain]

/laughs. I was so tempted to add an extra line at the end here "After all, he needed someone to clean his rooms after he made a mess of it all." But I decided against because Arthur's strategic mine was elsewhere at the moment.

I hope you'll like the rest, I'll try to get it up as soon as I can. =)

[scarysnapey]

*deep breath*

OMG IM SO EXCITED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!one!!!1

One thing:

Arthur bit back a childish, ”But, father! He was a prince, he would act like one. Is there a missing " in there?

[illusionrain]

THAT'S A LOT OF EXCLAMATION MARKS O.O /grins. I'll make sure to have the next part up soon!

And thanks for catching that, fixed. =)