[Harry Potter] Fic: Differences

[illusionrain]

Title: Differences
Characters/Pairings: Astoria, Bellatrix, Narcissa, Bellatrix/Astoria, Narcissa/Astoria, Draco/Astoria
Word Count: 2,798
Rating: R, for triggery content
Warning: Dub-con. Partner betrayal. Sex (non-graphic).
Summary: She doesn’t know what she’s missing until she has it.
Disclaimer: Not mine! Characters belong to J.K. Rowling.
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Comments

[dexstarr]

*fans self*

*dies of happiness*

I LOVE IT. WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE. THEY FAIL ME.

I come back in a bit and try again <3

[illusionrain]

I'm so glad you like it!! <3 I wasn't sure if I could pull this off from Astoria's pov, but I gave it my best shot. =)

/grins and helps with the fanning.

[dexstarr]

Yeah, I love it just as much the second time around. And third. <3

I love the way you describe things! Like: A laugh broke free from the older woman’s mask of perpetual indifference, Narcissa’s eyes bright and alive like the ocean in the midst of a terrible storm. Yummmmmmmmy. Nom nom on your words!

I have a new sudden love for Bellatrix/Astoria, and my my do I adore how you wrote Narcissa/Astoria. I like how you compare Narcissa to her sister, but she's gentler. And Astoria! I like how she's going against what her family wants, and pretty much voluntarily put herself in this position. Learning Occlumency/Legilimency from Bellatrix...more yummyness, especially when she tries to do it to Narcissa.

I am soo going to get on you in December :P I want MORE. :D

I LOVE YOU!

[illusionrain]

/grins. I'm all for writing more of this, so don't worry. Just make sure to remind me like crazy ;)

I'm so so glad you liked it enough to leave such a lovely comment. I wrote this just for you, after all, and it's great to know I wasn't too off-base with what I wrote and thought you would like. And /blushes. It's wonderful to get feedback on what sentences struck a chord. I'm never sure if I'm doing descriptions and imagery right, haha, so I'm glad to hear you liked it.

/LOVES BACK!

[dexstarr]

I would say you should be posting this around, and get some more love on it :D If you wanted of course. Never enough yummy femslash around!

I would say you know me quite well! <3

[illusionrain]

Hmm. I have no idea where I'd post it, but I just might =)

/grins. And I can only hope to know you better in the future!