Hunters Chapter Two

[illusions_chan]

Chapter One

Two - The BeginningThree years ago

They had been chosen selectively from different divisions. They were the best of the best, young and hungry, and that’s exactly what the NIS wanted in a special unit.

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Kim Jonghyun entered the apartment silently, one ear plugged with a bud to his mp3 player.

He was carrying a duffle over one shoulder

Comments

[arymee]

This seems interesting! All the characters are so cool. Looking forward to next chapter :)

[illusions_chan]

Thank you! ♥ I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter may take a little while since it's turning out a lot longer than I expected, but I'll try to finish it ASAP.

[illusions_chan]

Thank you! ♥ Oh gosh, I hope I can make them as epic as you're expecting. I'll try my hardest!

[kiyabaybee]

Ok I was gonna sleep but like the first one I got so into it that I had to finish
Anyway.... I am glad Jinki wasn't the intellectual & also that he wasn't making chicken cause that's just overdone way tok much now
Yes with Taemin I was like wut? Lol but I like when things are different & you made me awkwardly shy so yeah that was cute?
I like Jonghyun & Minho's characters the best so far, I'm not too sure why, it's just they intrigue me. Thank you for not having Jonghyun cocky even though he's a badass lol
Yeah I saw my name there & that was suprising
My comment sucks so I'm just gonna stop now
Yes before I forget... I shall be looking forward to the next update cause I really like this & reading it just... I don't even know the words to describe what I mean >.<
Ok bye now

[illusions_chan]

Oh, I hope you didn't miss out on too much sleep, but I'm glad you stopped by.

I'm glad you agree. I feel like Jinki himself isn't at all like his Onew personality. I feel like that's the role been given to him by SM and while he plays it well, I don't find it authentic. As for Jonghyun, I've never seen him be cocky in person, so I don't associate it all with him. He seems to be the shyest out of the boys. All the others don't even hesitate to be loud and active in variety shows, but Jonghyun seems uncomfortable with anyone outside of SHINee, except for some of SuJu boys. So I tried to keep him in character as possible.

And see, your comment didn't suck. I enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for reading and reviewing. ♥ It's always so encouraging.

[kiyabaybee]

I get those moments when I feel the exact way about Artist & it's sad... I couldn't imagine having to act a certain way like when cameras are around & stuff but I guess thats part of the job
Tbh Jonghyun has the baddass cocky look to him but yeah it's not his fault he just looks like that lol & I personally like that but having that look doesn't mean you have that personality
My pleasure :)