two poems

[ilovepippntook]

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[stringchica89]

Masterful poem!...I added u 2 my friends list..luv ya ~Pip

one poem for another

[bistangel]

Angel of the fallen

Lost in the dark falling far not long to go
Before my perilous end help before I die
Darkness covers me body and whole
Before I finally lose control
Help me my savior my angel.... angel of peril angel of darkness...
Im still falling then you come
My wings grow and I become darkness true darkness
For you have failed you came to late I fell to the bottom and lost control darkness flooded my body and you have fled
For fear my angel of darkness
Are you afraid for I haven’t fallen?
For I have won with out your help
You are gone and Im am stronger better
You are falling now
Not soo far before you hit your perilous end
But I will be there
To catch you your angel
Your savior now

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Pretty