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sick_of_it_all May 8 2003, 06:39:30 UTC
i like that alot abbie. ur a good writer.

[just a suggestion... use punctuation where you want pauses. it will give the poem better rhythm]

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Re: ilovepopsicles2 May 8 2003, 13:36:02 UTC
thanks yeah im not good with punctuation lol

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lxlpaperbaglxl May 8 2003, 06:56:53 UTC
i heart you

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Re: ilovepopsicles2 May 8 2003, 13:05:09 UTC
i heart you too

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