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ilovescarves89

Fic: Beautifully Wrong (7C/12)

Jan 13, 2013 20:21

Media: Fic
Title: Beautifully Wrong
Author: Luca
Rating: NC-17 (overall and to be safe - most of it stays in PG-13 territory)
Characters: ftm!Blaine, Kurt, Blaine's parents, Cooper, Sebastian, Trent, various ND members, non-major OCs.
Spoilers: Up to 3.22 to be safe. Canon up to 3.05 and largely canon compliant beyond that (with some notable exceptions ( Read more... )

fic, fic: beautifully wrong

Comments 16

lemmesay January 13 2013, 20:24:11 UTC

Wow. I just. Wow.
That was an amazing chapter.
But just. Blaainneeee, sweetiepie ;__;.

ilovescarves89 January 19 2013, 21:55:44 UTC

Thank you. <3 And sorry? It gets better? :p

hektet January 13 2013, 20:29:31 UTC

I feel so bad for both of them. Poor babies! :-(

ilovescarves89 January 19 2013, 21:56:00 UTC

I know. I'm horrible. Sorry. :p

anonymous January 13 2013, 21:59:58 UTC

NOOO THEY WERE FINALLY GONNA DO IT AND WAAAHHH :(

MY POOR BABIES WHY :(

ilovescarves89 January 19 2013, 21:58:21 UTC

I'm sorryyyy. :p

hazyjayne January 13 2013, 22:33:48 UTC

Oh boys.

I just want to give them both a hug.

And Blaine a Harnesses 101 chat.

Writing-wise: Bravo! I find it really interesting you gave them a really "terrible" first time; as in pain as I do feel now for the boys I find it very refreshing you went down this path... Hopefully they are going to be talking soon again?

ilovescarves89 January 19 2013, 22:10:21 UTC

Yeah, me too. :/

Thank you! In the original outline the evolution of their sex life was actually much, much simpler, but when it came to actually writing it, it felt far too superficial and unsatisfying (excuse the pun) and here we are. :) Probably just as well that I suck at outlining properly, because I'd probably have given up before I even started if I'd known what I was getting myself into. :p You'll have to wait for the next part. (Which should be up really soon. Hopefully.) :)

stultiloquentia January 13 2013, 22:54:35 UTC

Damn, you are being fearless with this, and I'm so grateful for it.

I'm grateful for that mess of a sex scene. I feel a bit cruel, saying this, but I was kind of hoping something like that would happen the first time they played with the packer, though I couldn't have anticipated the circumstances. Sex fail is so rarely written in any fanfic genre, no matter what bodies are involved, and it's wonderful to see it written so honestly, with so much compassion. It's nice to have models, you know? Sometimes sex is a disaster, and sometimes you can collapse into giggles and carry on, and sometimes it's not so easy, but it's not the end of the world. They'll flail and angst and do stupid shit, and then they'll pull each other through this and inch that much closer to adulthood. You make it so easy to love both of them.

Fuck, the bullying was awful to read. But I'm glad you didn't defang it.

Your writing is just superb, and I think growing stronger as you go along.

ilovescarves89 January 19 2013, 22:19:06 UTC

Thank you so much for that wonderful comment. And I find this beautiful for some reason: They'll flail and angst and do stupid shit, and then they'll pull each other through this and inch that much closer to adulthood.

Not gonna lie, I was really freaked out just after I finished that scene, partly for personal reasons and because I worried I'd gone too far, but like you said, I didn't want to "defang" it either.

Thank you! I'm insanely insecure about my writing (I think many writers are) so this is wonderful to hear. :)