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iloveteukie2

The Angel and The Raccoon Chapter 1

Jun 16, 2010 23:37

Title: Angel and Raccoon
Chapter: 1
Characters: Kangin, Leeteuk, Ryeowook, Sungmin
Pairings: Kangteuk, Sungwook
Rating: PG
Summary: Leeteuk is the loner, the guy that doesn't depend on anyone. The guy that pushes anyone who tries to get close away. Then Kangin, a mysterious charmer, whose also 100% straight, shows up out of nowhere, and toys with ( Read more... )

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fidomom June 17 2010, 05:09:51 UTC

Was it in Kangin's skinny days (how can he fit Teukie's clothes)? LOL! Otherwise it's enjoyable so far. Teukie babbling was cute. ^_^

~FM :)

iloveteukie2 June 21 2010, 03:23:29 UTC

hmm, lets say it was.
Or that Leeteuk let him wear one of his bigger, loose fitting shirts!

fidomom June 21 2010, 03:53:55 UTC

that sounds sexy if it was a bigger shirt! LOL! Kangin would fill it in so ... unf. o_o Plus they have shared a shirt at least once before; a black and white striped v-neck.

~FM :)

cloud_alones June 17 2010, 05:56:03 UTC

I like the plot!!!

digipatd June 21 2010, 03:39:02 UTC

I think I only have praise for this chapter. I really really like opening the story in the rain, for some reason. Symbolism or something.

The depth of characterization you give Leeteuk is incredible to me; I'm not sure where it's coming from, but I love that.