You left me nothing but pain

Mar 10, 2005 14:33


You left me nothing but pain

Let these lies you crowd around me

Fade with me to the darkness until... there’s a true blue sky

With your tricks you play me.

With your layers you cloud me.

With your eyes you make me.

With your lies you break me.

The only thing you said to be true…

Is you said there was darkness on this road

I did not heed your ( Read more... )

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baah_saysfrank8 March 10 2005, 19:45:44 UTC
thats awesome and your awesome. ur lucky u have such a good talent writing. <3

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funfun4me March 10 2005, 20:19:10 UTC
Y havent i seen ur face on a bus yet??

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ilovetostones March 10 2005, 20:24:24 UTC
lol awe thanks you guys

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passionateslave March 10 2005, 20:40:08 UTC
very nice... my favorite line...

"You said it was my heart, not my dignity you’d steal."

excellent contrast. great work. keep writing!

angel of music, i denied you, turning from true beauty...
lindsay aka ~Charlie~

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ilovetostones March 10 2005, 21:23:48 UTC
lol thanks charlie..

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passionateslave March 10 2005, 21:24:41 UTC
shush, its my alter ego. ;)

he was bound to love you when he heard you sing...
~Charlie~

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ilovetostones March 10 2005, 21:32:30 UTC
lol i see well gimmie yo numba and ill call..

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to_cry March 10 2005, 21:31:06 UTC
you're a great writer joe. you know i love all your songs :)! keep writing, cuz you could definitely get somewhere with all that!! <33

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___alwaysn4ever March 10 2005, 22:00:13 UTC
i love all ur songs!!! their really good! ur prob. gonna have a book full when ur older lol :) bye

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