[Fanfic] Don't Cry My Lover

[iluv_wonjaemin]

OhMyGod!! I finally post my very first fanfic here!! Seriously, I have no confident on posting this here~
Aigoo~~
Hope it would be fine ><
Please bare with my broken english dan common plot~
I wrote this looong time ago, this is my chance to post it here~
Give me strengh please~

Here we go...

Title: Don't Cry My Lover
Pairing: Yoochun >< OC, wooyoung >< OC

Comments

[qrn]

Hey hun!
Told ya I'd come by ^^
Overall it's good plot~
Your English is fine, dear =)

Just want to point out a few things (if you don't mind):
I think it'd better if you use double spacing, that way people won't get confused when reading it. It's also necessary to use capital letters for character names, for the same reason. Also, try not to use a lot of exclamation/question marks in a row, because this is meant to be a sad, emotional fic (as opposed to a funny one).

I love Yoochun, so seeing him in this story made me happy =D
Hope this comment helps,
xoxo

[iluv_wonjaemin]

oho~
okok! I appreciate that :D
btw,I still dont get bout what you mean "double spacing" here~
should I [enter] the paragraph twice??
hoooho~~

thanks for reading :D
ur comment helps so much :D

[qrn]

Yep it means press [enter] twice, like I do in my fics ^^
Anytime hun xoxo