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[iluvmytravis182]

My bounty is as boundless as the sea, my love as deep;
the more I give to thee, the more I have, for both are infinite

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[shatteredxstone]

The only thing i find not charming in that, is that by saying your love is as deep as the sea, it means your love is finite. I personally think the first line would have been better if "sea" was replaced by "galaxy" or "universe."

Just my opinion. :)

[iluvmytravis182]

thats very true