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[im_matt_see_me]

Ok so same stuff as usual nuthin really new hung out with Sarah last nite that was fun and i met a girl named michelle on myspace and she started talkin bout the poems i had in my buddyprofile so i decided to start writting again and this is wat i wrote last nite while i was goin to bed tell me wat u guys think

Comments

[anonymous]

not bad...now whom are you talking about??

:P

[im_matt_see_me]

who is this?

[_lovesxsuicidex]

It's cute. Really.
Want me to be honest-?
It's good really. it just- seems like
Sometimes you're trying too hard to rhyme
Just write what you feel and what you think
It doesn't all have to rhyme perfectly

If you want me to lie-
Well shiiiiiiiiiiiiitttt
Emerson and Dickinson wish they were that good.
Psht. Hah, hope you're havin a good summer babe
Loves&&hugS♥

[anonymous]

hahaha...its fun to play mind games with people.

[i_am_not_scene]

I don't look at your journal for so long, and then I randomly come back and see this, so I thought I'd comment. I know you probably didn't miss them, but oh well.

It's good, but I agree with _lovesxsuicidex". You seem to be trying to ryhme. A rhyme shouldn't be forced, it should just happen and work out. You know?

Bye bye again, kid.
P.S. I'm not the anonymous person, incase you were getting any ideas.

[i_am_not_scene]

grr.. _lovesxsuicidex
Stupid LJ codes.