Jun 05, 2008 00:44
I WROTE A POEM.
BECAUSE I AM TOO SAD TO DANCE OUT MY FEELINGS.
MY WINTER HEART
IT HURTS
BECAUSE IT’S COLD
COLDER THAN THE SNOW
THE COLD INSIDE MY SOUL
TOO COLD TO CRY
THE TEARS FREEZE IN MY EYES
THE ONLY TEARS COME FROM MY VEINS
RED WITH MY RAGE
YOU ALL HAVE A PLACE
IN MY HEART
WHERE IT IS SO COLD
IT BURNS
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MY FAVORITE PART IS ABOUT THE COLD BURNING, BECAUSE THAT IS NOT WHAT I WOULD HAVE EXPECTED. VERY CLEVER! :D
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//AANG
LOL! <3 "MY FAVORITE PART IS ABOUT THE COLD BURNING, BECAUSE THAT IS NOT WHAT I WOULD HAVE EXPECTED." YOU ROCK SO HARD. XD
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I HOPE YOU'LL WRITE MORE POEMS, AANG!
/FANG
HA HA, I'M GLAD I COULD RETURN THE FAVOR, BECAUSE YOUR POEM MADE ME LOL!
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*SPITS OUT MASCARA* D:
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BUT YOUR POEM SUCKS
MAYBE IT'S CUZ YOU'RE NOT FIRE NATION
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AHH, POETRY. ^_^ WORDS ARE LIKE CLOUDS IN THE SKY... ALWAYS, THERE, ALWAYS IMPORTANT TO THE WAY THE WEATHER WORKS... AND SINCE THE EARTH RESPONDS TO THE WEATHER, WORDS BRING LIFE... ^_^
...TEA, AANG?
/IROH
I LOL @ MY AWFUL ATTEMPT TO MIMICK IROH'S IMPOSSIBLE ANALOGIES XD
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