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Jun 05, 2008 00:44

I WROTE A POEM.

BECAUSE I AM TOO SAD TO DANCE OUT MY FEELINGS.

MY WINTER HEART

IT HURTS

BECAUSE IT’S COLD

COLDER THAN THE SNOW

THE COLD INSIDE MY SOUL

TOO COLD TO CRY

THE TEARS FREEZE IN MY EYES

THE ONLY TEARS COME FROM MY VEINS

RED WITH MY RAGE

YOU ALL HAVE A PLACE

IN MY HEART

WHERE IT IS SO COLD

IT BURNS

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mista_sneaky June 8 2008, 05:43:08 UTC
CRY ME A RIVER.

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im_tha_avatah June 12 2008, 05:59:59 UTC
SHUT UP! YOU JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT I'M GOING THROUGH! IT IS VERY PAINFUL AND SAD! READ THE POEM AGAIN. OBVIOUSLY, I CANNOT CRY YOU A RIVER BECAUSE MY HEART HAS BECOME SO COLD I CANNOT CRY ANY MORE. DUH! >:C

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fangyouverymuch June 8 2008, 19:18:07 UTC
WOW, I AM REALLY IMPRESSED BY PEOPLE WHE CAN EXPRESS THEIR FEELINGS CREATIVELY. I WISH I COULD WRITE AS WELL AS YOU! YOU ARE JUST AS SMART AND GREAT AS ROKU!

MY FAVORITE PART IS ABOUT THE COLD BURNING, BECAUSE THAT IS NOT WHAT I WOULD HAVE EXPECTED. VERY CLEVER! :D

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im_tha_avatah June 12 2008, 06:02:49 UTC
THANK YOU. FINALLY, SOMEONE WHO GETS ME!

//AANG
LOL! <3 "MY FAVORITE PART IS ABOUT THE COLD BURNING, BECAUSE THAT IS NOT WHAT I WOULD HAVE EXPECTED." YOU ROCK SO HARD. XD

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fangyouverymuch June 12 2008, 06:34:54 UTC
WELL, I AM ROKU'S SPIRITUAL GUIDE. NOT TO BE BOASTFUL, BUT I AM PRETTY GOOD AT UNDERSTANDING AVATARS.

I HOPE YOU'LL WRITE MORE POEMS, AANG!

/FANG
HA HA, I'M GLAD I COULD RETURN THE FAVOR, BECAUSE YOUR POEM MADE ME LOL!

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thekingsbear June 9 2008, 01:56:29 UTC
*LICKS FACE*

*SPITS OUT MASCARA* D:

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im_tha_avatah June 12 2008, 06:05:58 UTC
GREAT, NOW I HAVE TO GO RE=APPLY MY MAKE UP! >:[

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colonies_suck June 10 2008, 10:56:52 UTC
THERE ARE SO MANY GOOD POETS OF THIS INTERNET THING, IN THIS COMMUNITY TO BE SPECIFIC.

BUT YOUR POEM SUCKS

MAYBE IT'S CUZ YOU'RE NOT FIRE NATION

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im_tha_avatah June 12 2008, 06:06:41 UTC
OR MAYBE IT'S BECAUSE YOU'RE DUMB AND DON'T UNDERSTAND THE COMPLEXITIES OF MY EMOTIONS!

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colonies_suck June 12 2008, 09:12:30 UTC
YOU AIRBENDERS AND YOUR STUPID EMOTIONS. IF YOU WERE FIRE NATION WE WOULD HAVE KILLED YOU BY NOW. OR SENT YOU TO THE COAL PITS. EITHER ONE.

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sexy_tea_god June 18 2008, 19:47:13 UTC
*SIPS TEA*
AHH, POETRY. ^_^ WORDS ARE LIKE CLOUDS IN THE SKY... ALWAYS, THERE, ALWAYS IMPORTANT TO THE WAY THE WEATHER WORKS... AND SINCE THE EARTH RESPONDS TO THE WEATHER, WORDS BRING LIFE... ^_^
...TEA, AANG?

/IROH
I LOL @ MY AWFUL ATTEMPT TO MIMICK IROH'S IMPOSSIBLE ANALOGIES XD

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