LJ Idol Season 8, week 27, Once Upon a Time

May 14, 2012 11:11

Once upon a time there was a little girl who dreamed of magic and fairies. She lived in two worlds, one of going to school, eating dinner with her family and playing board games with her brother, and another world of fairies and unicorns. It seems most girls want to feel the silken hide of a unicorn or learn how to do a magic spell like a fairy ( Read more... )

writing, season eight, attempt at fiction, lj idol

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lawchicky May 15 2012, 20:41:58 UTC
What a tricky little fairy.

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imafarmgirl May 16 2012, 00:22:32 UTC
Yep, little pain in the ass. Thanks for reading.

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halfshellvenus May 16 2012, 00:43:36 UTC
I liked it-- I think you should try fiction more often!

I liked the dark little twists, where at first it seemed as if the woman was being blessed by something, and later that she'd attracted something awful.

She got her wish, in that neither she nor her baby were taken at that first encounter. And when she went the second time, the choice was much easier.

Plus, she didn't later haunt her son, so it turned out well for him too.

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imafarmgirl May 16 2012, 10:03:39 UTC
Really, thanks. I had fun writing it, but then thought maybe my fiction wasn't very good.

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mstrobel May 16 2012, 02:16:43 UTC
I loved this - totally my kind of story! That was a fantastic read and really interesting how it all came together.

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imafarmgirl May 16 2012, 10:06:23 UTC
Thanks so very much. I'm glad you liked it.

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pixiebelle May 16 2012, 03:03:05 UTC
This was a really neat story! I love fairy stories and this one was a little dark and had some tough choices! Great job! I was so happy to see fiction from you :)

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whipchick May 16 2012, 03:59:40 UTC
This is neat - I love the conundrum of choosing a quick death earlier than you're ready, or a slow death when you want it.

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imafarmgirl May 16 2012, 10:10:15 UTC
Thanks. I enjoyed throwing in a twist.

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