when you prey move your feet

[imagemirror]

A car horn wakes me,
2am, in a single bed with sheets too small. A dorm room in some
crappy hostel in some crappy city, in a country that is technically
home but hasn't felt like that for.... however long I've been away.
I lie in my unfamiliar bed thinking about where I am. On the road again
trying to find a place to call home for the next week, month,

Comments

[majesticzaichik]

Interesting. I liked the format of this. I liked the resonating theme of praying to God even if you may not believe in Him...

[cacophonesque]

Starting off with poetry is always a bold move, but I can dig it.

And I think I jived onto an easy does it sort of reference in there.

[imagemirror]

thanks I wasn't really intening to write poetry but it just kind of ended up in that style. not to sure what an "easy does it reference" is tho

[m_malcontent]

Enjoyed the tension in this.

[whirlgig]

Really interesting take on the prompt; I liked the 'church' street scenes very much. It's given me food for thought for my own entry.

[walkertxkitty]

I like the tone of the piece and the peek into what it's like to be a musician on the road. You really ought to put spaces between your paragraphs, though, if you can. It makes the entry hard to read otherwise. Good take on the topic!

[imagemirror]

thanks for the feedback i really appreciate it