when you prey move your feet

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A car horn wakes me,
2am, in a single bed with sheets too small. A dorm room in some
crappy hostel in some crappy city, in a country that is technically
home but hasn't felt like that for.... however long I've been away.
I lie in my unfamiliar bed thinking about where I am. On the road again
trying to find a place to call home for the next week, month,

Comments

[zeitgeistic]

What an unusual format! But I think it works here. It kind of adds a sense of urgency to the writing.

[baxaphobia]

Gutsy move. I liked the idea of praying even though you don't believe. So may do that!

[whipchick]

Love the image of the audience as your co-addicts at a meeting. I get that one :)

[noodledays]

you used some great, fascinating images here.

[kittyfaelis]

foreign yet somehow very resonating
I'm not sure that makes sense, but I'm still thinking about this.
Looking forward to seeing what you do next.