Comments | imagined_haven: Fic: Open Windows

imagined_haven

Fic: Open Windows

Mar 18, 2011 11:36

Title: Open Windows
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Jim/Bones
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,100
Summary: Jim had never believed anything anyone said about eyes being windows to the soul or whatever it was. Then he met Bones.
A/N: Written for Ship Olympics over at st_respect .

( It all started with a glance... )

rating: pg, fic, kirk/mccoy, star trek xi

Comments 3

dftreaper March 18 2011, 15:50:29 UTC

Adorable! I definitely like this.

But you forgot a comma here: by the time Jim realized what was going on he was clinging to the brunet, face buried in his shoulder.

There should be one between "on" and "he".

imagined_haven March 18 2011, 16:02:22 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you! Fixing. :)

nikaratrenal March 18 2011, 23:50:00 UTC

Very sweet. I love the line about Bones rolling his eyes. Well done!