Fic: "While Gold Remained," Remus/Sirius.

[imagines]

I wrote this in the fall of 2007, and it's been chilling on my hard drive ever since. I don't quite remember why I didn't post it sooner. I polished it up last year and was going to post it then, but I forgot about it. Here it is, finally. ...I suspect it might be as much Shoebox fanfic as HP fanfic. ;p

While Gold Remained. Remus/Sirius. Set

Comments

[sapphirestar_]

oh oh oh there are so many things i love about this. something perhaps like this:

1) SIRIUS QUOTING POETRY pffffft. \o/
2) the banter and all of the dialogue, really
3) remus/front lawn & sirius/motorbike
4) JAMES x a gajillion
5) ... AND EVERYTHING ELSE, TOO, MAYBE?

seriously, this was very lovely and refreshing and beautifully silly and happy and the way you write the boys is exactly the way i like to read them. ♥ :D

[imagines]

ohhh your comment made me so happy. I was a bit worried I'd forgotten all about how to write these boys! thank you thank you. ♥

[cherie_morte]

This was so much fun and so cute!! I loved bubbly!Sirius and how sneaky and ok with everything he was.

I'm also greatly pleased by your username. But that had nothing to do with anything.

[imagines]

Thank you! ♥

Hee. I may be a wee bit obsessed with T.S. Eliot?

[cherie_morte]

It's a positive, life-affirming addiction :)

[jedusor]

I love you.

[imagines]

*wiggle* I love you too! <3

[hello_ilu]

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REMUS'S TALENTED STOMACH-NIFFLER. JAMES ONLY FELL OFF THAT ONE TIME. BACK OF NEWT IF YOU MUST. THE MOTORBIKE. REMUS'S DEEP AND ABIDING LOVE FOR THE GRASS. A VERY CHOCOLATEY CAKE. JAMES BEING ~TOTALLY COOL WITH IT~. AN ELEPHANT PRACTICING NEEDLEPOINT. EAT ONE AND HAVE ROOM FOR THE OTHER. "IT WAS A PLEASURE SUCKING YOU OFF."

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♥______________♥

[imagines]

*bowled over by capslock; retaliates with punctuation* WHY THANK YOU!!!!!!!

[seilf_emit]

I... that... *wibblesigh* That was so sweet and funny and hot and right. I can't quote any favorite bits, because THE WHOLE THING OMG!

And the banter! I have such a thing for well-paced and imaginative banter, and this was just and absolute dream to read.

Sorry about the incoherence, my higher brain functions seem to be permanently out to lunch.

[imagines]

*gigantic grin* Thank you, you're very kind. <3<3