haiku-esque thoughts for my depressed soul

Oct 14, 2008 22:22

heart dumps
loneliness
without cause

mind desires
escape
in hoofbeats

the moon
watches unconcerned
and bright

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evergrey October 15 2008, 06:33:07 UTC
*hugs* Yes, you must come have horse time. :)

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you must re-write vendalah October 21 2008, 01:48:03 UTC
heart dumps? heart dumps?? oh no, no, no, no, no. you are not to use this combination of words. it is forbidden.

the flying spaghetti monster will tendril you now.

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Re: you must re-write imaginethewolf November 16 2008, 06:04:02 UTC
lol, what are the rules of haiku again?

any suggestions?

miss you.

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