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Sep 27, 2011 12:44


Haehyuk | PG-13 | AU!School, Romance, Fluff
Siwon is a school star, Donghae is a jock and Hyukjae is trapped between.
Warning: Random plot, homophobic, foul language, slight OOC
Ime’s note: Talking about cliché... Let me make you cheap and cheesy all inside :) and I'm so terrible at making title LOL
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pairing: haehyuk, title: love story that have no title, length: chaptered, genre: romance, rating: pg-13, genre: school!au, genre: drama

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yuue04 September 30 2011, 03:18:15 UTC
I'm getting really excited when you say hae and hyuk will fall in love with someone they never expected *that means the beginning of haehyuk right???uhhh ~~~ I can't wait*
hae deserved that punch from hyoyeon *I still think he should reflect what he had done and what hyuk had done to save him kekeke*
heechul is as cool as ever kekeke
and hyuk's mom -- I'm also surprised at hyuk's mom reaction *I wish I had a mom like that-it doesn't mean I always fight though kekeke* and I wonder why hyuk say his father might congratulate him...his father is that cool???
unnie ~~~ I'm fine with any title you choose *giggles*
about mistake : I only spot this *I'm not even sure if this is a mistake kekeke*
“I know Mama. Well talk again tonight. Have a good day!” - I think you actually wanna wrote 'we'll' ???
thanks for updating unnie ~~~ <3333333333333

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ime_ime_ime October 1 2011, 04:21:08 UTC
Hahaha you bet! who else then it gonna be if not haehyuk?
LOL yeah, indeed, hyuk's parents are that cool!
is that so? hm... i'll consider it then...
ah! thanks for point out!
thank you so much >///< *chu~*

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ime_ime_ime October 1 2011, 06:18:35 UTC
Glad you did! :D
LOL omg... poor siwonie, but you actually found it funny?
and ah... how being an ass became adorable? XDD
yeah... true... hyohyuk is important for the drama hhahaha it's the kind of realationship hyukjae means by 'mutual compromise' and the change the relationship to success is high! wow, but dont worry, i'm not hyohyuk shipper :DDD eunhae forever!!
eh, did i say smthing about punishment? Mrs. principal just ask them to meet Mr. Song after school, whether or not they get detention is very depend on their teacher hehe but they will be miserable, that's for sure XDD
i shouldn't have say too much to you, but duh, every time you comment, i can't help it :p
you think the current title will do? hm... i'll consider it...

thank you very much *muach* for reading bb :D

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ime_ime_ime October 14 2011, 03:32:04 UTC
yeah... we need more teacher like Mr. Song, seriously!!
Ahaha yeah, he can be really stubborn at time :D he needs time.
i mean, it's weird if they suddenly glomping each other, right?
i swear they are healthy amount of eunhae in the future! just wait!
and he answer of that last question... hm...

thank you~ i'll try to update faster!

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brattygurl2011 October 12 2011, 05:28:03 UTC
Hae is so frustrating!!! His pride is stopping him from saying sorry even though he knows he's the one at fault for hitting Hyuk. He thinks pride is what makes him a man and strong when in fact being a man is being able to know your mistakes, apologizing without any excuses and taking whatever outcome comes from it. Just because you apologize that doesn't mean that the outcome is going to be bad for the one who apologizes. Sometimes the best of relationships and the happiest futures start with a sincere apology.

I like Mr. Song's character, how he fits the punishment with the crime. Will he know that Hae is lying that everything is fine? Will Mr. Song be the catalyst for Hae and Hyuk's relationship?

At least Hyuk tried to understand and tried to talk about it, but it takes two to make a relationship/friendship work. When they do get together they will be a nice balance for each other.

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ime_ime_ime October 14 2011, 03:34:46 UTC
oh, we don't know that yet, bb. i'll let donghae pouring his own thought at the problem in the next chapter so we wouldn't wondering :3

let's see how eunhae relationship work with Mr.Song as referee kekekeke

they are just teenagers bb, don't too hard on them! XD

thank you very much~

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yuue04 October 12 2011, 18:00:39 UTC
update update update ( ... )

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ime_ime_ime October 14 2011, 03:43:03 UTC
such a pain in a pretty ass, right? XD
and i guess i'm such a pain in ugly ass too XDD
i like teasing my reader, it makes me feels good at night to thinking that you couldn't put it off your head *evil laugh*
ah... you really nice for encouraging me like that *sobs*
thanks so much! chu~

ahaha, your comment is readable bb! i can feel your excitement :DDDD

Arbe? :( idk. We talked about it, i mean about her absence in LJ, just before she departed.
i missed her :((
my only hubby ;____;

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roka_maluv October 12 2011, 22:44:02 UTC
Damn u Donghae and your stubborn self !
he should have acted more mature and solved the problem or even talked it out !

will be waiting for more <3

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ime_ime_ime October 14 2011, 03:36:41 UTC
yeah, teenager...
stubborn and full of them selves...

i'll try ma best!!
thanks so much!!

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