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[imfortool]

A darkened stairwell to a darkened road

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[imfortool]

"Passing her on the street.
Two entire lives crossing for a single second"

I like this line the most. Think about it. Your full life, with your love, hate, freinds, work, sadness, joy. everything in your life and mind. then you make eye contact with someone for just a passing second. and you never see them again. but they have that full life too. Two full lives, full of everything a life can hold, joining for a second only, then never crossing paths again. Two lives crossing, two strings entwined, for a second only. Then its past

[evolving_idea]

Dude, your definitely one of my favorite poets! (and i usually hate poetry)

[anonymous]

That's amazing Jeremy...It's really good. I like it.

~~Genevieve

(And hey, so much for playing savior Mr. goes downstairs to play pool)

[blue_angel_13]

you are amazing.

[imfortool]

i wouldnt say amazing, but im half decent

[blue_angel_13]

you are. pretty much everything you write is really good. you have so much talent. i'm kinda jealous lol =)