Visiting Hours

[imladra]

Title: Visiting Hours
Series: Bleach
Pairing/Characters: Zaraki, Byakuya, Unohana, Yachiru  (Characters by Kubo Tite)
Warnings: None
Notes: Adult Yachiru. I'm sick today, and so came up with this.
Summary/Excerpt: “Even Captain Kuchiki has to respect visiting hours.”

Comments

[hu3long2]

So cheerful! I love Unohana in any form! :-) Especially her calling Byakuya "little brat" though it was followed by her thoughts on how repressed he was. Also like the touch where he considered trying to get past Unohana to see Yachiru.
Also like how Zaraki seems to be coming to terms with the relationship-- of course, he lets Byakuya dangle a while, but he does point out the right building to him, and he does assume that BYakuya has come by for no other reason than to visit Yachiru.

And of course, the utterly romantic gesture of coming through the windows, with hand picked flowers and candy... and the Seireitei News??!! (How like Byakuya!) And the scarf... a loverly and lovely touch-- he could no announce his intentions more clearly!

Lovely romantic start to the weekend!

[imladra]

Hee...the thought of Yachiru cuddling that scarf was just too irresistible. And yes, it absolutely does make his intentions clear. That was a major part of why it's there. :) (And of course, it would smell like him...lucky girl.)

Oh Zaraki. So unwilling. But he tries. :D

Writing Unohana was fun. I seem to really like looking at Byakuya and Yachiru's relationship through everyone else's eyes.

[sinian]

That's just... awwww!

Bya climbing through the window with flowers and other stuff in his arms, leaving his scarf, maybe stealing a kiss and taking off again. *sigh* What a nice image! :)

And I'm sick too, so it was really heartwarming for me. Thanks!

[imladra]

Glad you enjoyed it. :D

Funny you should mention a kiss...that subject is going to come up soon. :)

[sinian]

Really? Yay!
I just asked because I don't think Bya would do something like that when anyone else might be watching. He's way too dignified for that. ;)

[xsethsownstarx]

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!! ♥ILOVEYOUILOVEYOU!!!♥

THIS IS WONDERFULL!!!

Sorry for allcaps but I'm totally teary-eyed and squishified over here.. ♥♥♥♥♥

That was truly completely the sweetest thing ever.. Oh you make me fall in love with Bya over and over.. damn you..

[imladra]

I'm glad. :)

I don't think it's hard to love Bya. You just have to look really closely to find the reasons. :D