Comments | immertreu: Fic: "Burns" (Batman

immertreu

Fic: "Burns" (Batman - one-shot)

Aug 16, 2011 21:48

Everything hurt, but I couldn’t give in. Not yet.

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bruce wayne, jim gordon, alfred pennyworth, fanfic, batman

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delorita August 17 2011, 12:22:40 UTC

WOW!!! LOVE the first person POV!!! Wouldn't have expected that from you :D:D Nice and angsty!!!! And Alred would!!!! Really good written! You going to post it at FF.net?

immertreu August 17 2011, 17:02:54 UTC

Thanks, Del! *huggles* I was in the mood for angsty!

I know this isn't my usual style, but I was reading this very dark graphic novel last night and couldn't stop thinking about the "what if"...

Maybe I'll post it at FF.net, too (don't you think it's too short?) but I want a native speaker to take a look at it first. ;)

delorita August 19 2011, 13:44:39 UTC

not too short for ff.net. I put drabbles there :D So did you show it to karen or who is betaing it? I think its totally fine though!

immertreu August 20 2011, 11:21:05 UTC

Oops, made a mistake. I really hate that I can't edit my posts. Anyway, I couldn't reach Karen, but I met another friend that night who read it. Cudos to ceepee3

Thanks for the encouragement, I posted it at ff.net and I'm thinking about posting some of my drabbles there, too. :)

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