Kingdom Hearts : I (Don't) Like Riku.

[immoral]

title: I (Don't) Like Riku
series: Kingdom Hearts, Chain of Memories, Kingdom Hearts II
warnings: boys love, Sora/Riku, humor, cuteness, takes place after KH2 but contains no real spoilers
notes: For burningvigor. I tried to make the actual writing similar to that of Sora's personality- jumbled, emotional, easily distracted, heh.
fiction archive: memories

Comments

[pieces]

... Uhhh. I'm with hunted on this one. :D;

[riceball]

Awwwwwwww.

[shady_truth]

wowzers

that was pretty much the best characterization ever

[teddybear_angel]

*melts* That was sweet. ^^ I especially like this line: He can practically hear Riku rolling his eyes. It's a Riku thing. Because he's a jerk. XD But he's a lovable jerk, Sora!

This one though, is my favorite: Sora wonders if Kairi will get upset when he dropkicks their cohort. Several times. Bwahahaha!

Lovely, and I adore this.

[powercorrupts]

The jerk part is what makes this so hopelessly Sora. I think there's something so very raw here that is often forgotten in the relationship in most fanfics, instead sugarred over with cliches until all that is really awkward and teenage is forgotten.

I have such a love for all ficlets awkward and teenage when that is what is called for. I'd say something smarter, but you know I'm incapable of it. And you just got a longer comment than I think I've given today. =)