exasperating experimentation with run-ons :(

[immoralfear]

interregnum

our minutes are weighed
yet time does not exist

when we wade in shallow waters
emotions embedded in the sand
when fingers intertwine
bodies coalesce

our eyes light the path
if only for a moment

silence breaks
with laughter that fades
into incomprehensible syllables

(...)

Comments

[sorrie_bluez]

nice nice~ :)

[matthewseet]

hello, there's a dh lawrence piece of prose on my lj which came out for pc. i think you would like it cos' it's pretty... tragic. come and have a look.

[anonymous]

oh fleeting, oh run.
my seconds are done.

Like water slipped
from ugly hands,
my heart is ripped.

cuRRent...jer