Fanfiction: Stay With Me (English Version)

[immorta_beloved]

Title: Stay With Me
Fandom: Viewfinder
Pairing: Akihito x Fei Long
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: not worksafe, graphic sex, a hint of angst, reversed roles (seme!Akihito). No beta.
Spoilers: Naked Truth 10
Summary: after agreeing to the exchange, Fei Long and Akihito spend a last night together in Hong Kong, and Fei Long has a last wish... (set during the Hong

Comments

[radcat38]

Beautiful story....sigh...what could have been..sometimes ths timing is just not right....

[immorta_beloved]

Thanks for your compliment :-) I'm glad you found this good even though it was so sad...

[sparrow_hawk13]

Wow, pretty sad. Never thought of this pairing but you took it to the next level. Thank you for sharing.

[immorta_beloved]

Thank you so much for your comment ^_^

[ickyickypoopoo]

Ooohhhh Akhito finally got to top someone and it was Fei Long... Ooohhhhh

So angsty and sad but hot...

[immorta_beloved]

Thanks for your comment ^_^

I wanted to try to write Akihito in a good way (since I don't like him so much) and I wanted to make him top... Making him top Asami would hav been... Well, too much xD so I thought Aki x Fei Long was a more "possible" and less weird reversed pairing ^_-

Thanks again for commenting ^_^ *hugs*

Re: beautiful

[immorta_beloved]

Thanks for your lovely compliment! ^_^

I'm glad you liked that sentence ^_^ That's one of those I enjoyed the most when I wrote this fic ^_^

Thanks for commenting!! *hugs*

[white_rose83]

I love this story...really sad for Fei.
But this can't be help, Akihito always belong to Asami.
Thank you for sharing...

[immorta_beloved]

Thanks for leaving a comment ^_^
I'm glad you liked it though it was very sad...
thanks for your compliment :-)

PS: may I ask you how you found this? this is a rather old post, I'm surprised (and utterly pleased) someone still reads and comments on it ^_^

[white_rose83]

I love to read viewfinder fan fiction.
I just started to join LJ so I'm searching that and found your story.
I love your story, it's give me new point of view from Fei Long side ( since I think his such a beautiful person ).
Thank you to add me as your friend ^_^

PS : Sorry, if I make mistake in this reply, since english is my native language >.<

[immorta_beloved]

I really appreciate the fact that my story has given you a new point of view about Fei Long, because he is indeed a beautiful and interesting character, and, for me, it's a pleasure to write and read fanfictions where his thoughts are explored.
I'm glad you loved my story :-) it was the first fanfiction I've ever posted about the viewfinder fandom :-) kept writing some more about Fei Long, if you're interested you can have a look in the rest of my posts ^_~

I've added you to my f-list, if you wish you can add me back ^_^

PS: don't worry for your English, everybody makes little mistakes ^_^ English isn't my mother language, too, I come from Italy xD

Thank you for reviewing so kindly :-) *hugs*