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immortal_muse

H/D NC-17: Giving In

Nov 16, 2006 20:16

Title: Giving In
Author: immortal_muse
Pairing: H/D
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 316
Warning: Oral
Disclaimer: Harry and Draco belong to JK Rowling.
Summary: Draco always gets what he wants.

Harry’s head hit the wall with a painful thud, a pain that was almost instantly forgotten. He braced his left arm on the nearby armoire that shook when the sudden force ( Read more... )

Comments 24

sloane_hd November 17 2006, 20:41:59 UTC

I really liked that last line. Of course the rest was brilliant too.

immortal_muse November 19 2006, 01:24:48 UTC

The last line was something that just came to me when I had thought I was finished. I was just like 'oh yeah...that'd be funny'.

*grins* So glad you liked it.

xstarlightbunny November 18 2006, 03:57:28 UTC

Haha, brilliant!!! XD

immortal_muse November 19 2006, 01:26:32 UTC

XD

They don't call Slytherins "cunning" for nothin'.

flowergurl4675 November 18 2006, 05:31:52 UTC

It's so ... just what I needed. xDD Lurves it. <3

immortal_muse November 19 2006, 01:27:25 UTC

Yay! I luff that you luv it!

enchanted_jae November 18 2006, 09:43:26 UTC

Buahahahahaha! I love cunning!Draco, especially when he goes to such lengths to get his way!

immortal_muse November 19 2006, 01:29:34 UTC

And how could you possibly say 'no' to THAT?

:D

areadyheart November 18 2006, 13:21:48 UTC

guh. i think this is the hottest drabble i've ever read. seriously, this line:

His cock, and Draco’s luscious, pink lips were glistening with saliva and his own pre-cum.

just about killed me. damn.

immortal_muse November 19 2006, 01:31:14 UTC

Guh! hottest drabble i've ever read *dies*

Thanks so much!